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Dreamy Delight

"Dreamy Delight" Lips caress the soft outline of tender silky skin in delicate circles moistening deep passion flames within. Arms embrace muscular form exciting nestled nerves while dreamy delight ignites cherished curve on curves. Legs entwine a throbbing heart in full thrust of desire as embers from the fireplace crackle shards of fire. Souls surrender to ecstasy as words inspire blank page illuminating thoughts content to live in creative cage. Dreams invade as love forever pursues to fantasize eventually crossing over to reality capturing love's prize. *For Michael J. Falotico's "Deep Dreams" Contest. *Nov. 10, 2012.

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  1. Date: 12/10/2012 9:12:00 AM

    The rational senses are anesthetized when the raw emotions of love stimulate. You captured the captivating passions that a sensual love sparks. Enjoyed your titillating verses!

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 7:51:00 AM

    Congratulations on your super placement in Michael's "Deep Dreams" contest Linda-Marie. I am sorry this is late. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 8:54:00 AM

    Congrats on your sure win, Linda! it was sweet and sensual.

  1. Date: 11/24/2012 7:28:00 AM

    This is very passionate,Sweet Heart.Congratulations on your well deserved win!

  1. Date: 11/24/2012 7:07:00 AM

    "Souls surrender to ecstasy as words inspire blank page illuminating thoughts content to live in creative cage." Impressed and very moved by this line..... Many many congrats. Ellie Daphne

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 11:34:00 PM

    Congratulations on your awesome win my dear friend, Linda-M! love always, Leonora

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 6:04:00 PM

    Congrats on your winning work..Sara

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 5:56:00 PM

    Sweet Linda my bff, congratulations!;-) With your "deep dream" win in Michael's awesome contest. Good night~PD

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 6:52:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win! Every line is gorgeously written - I especially love the title.

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 6:06:00 AM

    Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 6:02:00 AM

    Congratulations Linda xx

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 5:50:00 AM

    congrats on your win Linda

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 5:44:00 AM

    Congrats Jersey Girl!!! on your win in my Deep Dream contest... Hope your Thanksgiving Day was a wonderful one.. Luv Michael

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 3:12:00 PM

    beautiful, Linda. How is it going today?

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 2:32:00 PM

    love this beautiful write, my friend - congrats on all your wins : ) I hope your hands are feeling better and that the weather is much kinder there xxx

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 12:47:00 PM

    Hi Linda marie wow waht a dream good luck in the contest, though this reads like winner to me, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 9:40:00 AM

    Very deep dream enjoyed. Good luck in the contest, my friend. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 9:13:00 AM

    A beautiful and brilliantly composed passionate write my friend, blended with beauty of fire which burns, when two hearts and bodies meet. But when two souls meet it reaches to an ecstasy of joy and you have sketched both these brilliant colors in this lovely write Linda. My good wishes for your contest entry. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra...SH Linda Marie

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 8:02:00 AM

    ‡ Listening Unto Lionel Richie's Song, 'I Want You I Need You To Need Me I'm Going Crazy For Love, Over You.' Tis Such A Beautiful Song, Sweet Beautiful Wonderful LindaMarie. Just Stopping Back By To Wish Your Beauty A Beautiful Day. May Its Sun Shine Bright Inside Your Priceless Heart! My Love, Forever, Rachel *

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 1:46:00 PM

    Great job!!!

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 8:41:00 AM

    truly beautiful, Linda... wonderful entry..

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 5:23:00 AM

    Reads like a winner for Michael's contest..Good luck..To dream the impossible dream..What would yours be?..Enjoyed reading ...Sara

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 4:09:00 AM

    Voluptuous!!! Terry

  1. Date: 11/10/2012 8:46:00 PM

    It firecrackles with beauty, Michael will love it, I can hear it now, way to go Jersey Girl, always a pleasure to read your work Linda, hope all is well, thinking of you, fondly, vie

  1. Date: 11/10/2012 7:54:00 PM

    ‡ Breathless, Would Be The Best Word Found To Describe How It Feels Inside, When Being Touched By Such Profound Beauty, Sweet Beautful Captivating LindaMarie. Thus I Must Thank Your Beauty From The Deepest Of My Heart, For Being Sooo Very Kind As To Visit, Amid All Of Your Splendours! Sweet Dreams To You, And Have A Beautiful Night. My Love, Forever, Rachel *

  1. Date: 11/10/2012 6:33:00 PM

    ‡ Reminds Myself Of A Songs Lyrics Wherein Is Said, 'One Thing Leads To Another,' Sweet Beautiful & Priceless LindaMarie. If Anyone Could Ever Inspire Amid The Most Colourful In Splendour A Blank Waitings Page, Your Beauty, Most Surely Would Be They. Your Many Treasures' Opening Verse Is An Ultimate Testament Unto This Magnificent Truth. Scintilating, Stimulating, Sensual Emotions Birthing Ecstasies Wherein We Dream. A Beautiful Favourite In, The Most Beautiful Of Lights. My Love, Always, Me *

  1. Date: 11/10/2012 6:16:00 PM

    Wow, you have created a masterful write my friend! I am pleasantly surprised with the awesomeness of this poem Linda-Marie! You have crafted a delightful and stupendous piece! What an outstanding write, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 11/10/2012 6:00:00 PM

    OH POETS ..IN DREAMS WE CAN JOURNEY ANYWHERE AND TO ANYONE WE CHOOSE .. MY VERSION OF DEEP DREAMS CONTEST SO ENJOY WITH LUV ..

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