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Salty Tasting Love

                                                     Under the moonlight
                                                clothes drop to a silky floor
                                                     two bodies drip slow

                                                      Eyes do the talking
                                           while tongues see the candy treat
                                                       all under night sky

                                                       Sunrise reflects us
                                               drenched in juices of our lust
                                                        salty tasting love 

"Sexy Haiku Contest"
written by Michael J Falotico

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  1. Date: 12/9/2012 4:09:00 PM

    AAA,,, reading this poem once again.. How are you?? I'm watching movies, avoiding the football games.. LOL... have you seen how the soup has slowed down a lot... I wonder why??? I think it needs more salt...LOL... xox~PD

  1. Date: 12/1/2012 8:17:00 AM

    Yes love making isn't just sweet but can be salty too if you know what I mean! Enjoyed this hot haiku. -- Sean

  1. Date: 12/1/2012 7:28:00 AM

    Hi Michael with skills like these you are a natural for my Questionku contest, consider giving it a shot. 4 5 6 ending in a question

  1. Date: 11/18/2012 7:55:00 AM

    Congrats on your win for this wonderful poem about taste of love under the moon light and under the Sun. Enjoyed lately. Thanks for your comment on my write. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 11/15/2012 2:31:00 PM

    Congratulations Michael ...Seren

  1. Date: 11/15/2012 7:08:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in SandyIvy's "Natural/Nature Sexy Haiku" contest Michael. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/15/2012 4:58:00 AM

    Congrats on the hot haiku contest, well deserved xoxox Carma

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 5:35:00 PM

    SUPER CONGRATS MICHAEL LUV ON WINNING AN HM FOR THIS SULTRY STEAMY HAIKU .. OH RON IS FOGGING UP READING AS HIS LIBIDO IS WORKING OVERTIME READING ALL THE WINNING POEMS LUV .. U R ALWAYS NUMBER ONE TO YOUR JG ..FOREVER XOXO

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 4:59:00 PM

    congratulations. I had seen this one earlier and forgot to say how I enjoyed the title of it as well. (sorry about my prediction though!)

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 12:27:00 PM

    Hello, Michael I knew I would see you on the winners list... Congratulations,,, xox~pd

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 12:05:00 PM

    Very passionate work..Congrats on your great win..Sara

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 9:34:00 AM

    congrats on your win Michael

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 8:34:00 AM

    Congrats Michael on the win with these sexy haikus!! Jag

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 7:54:00 AM

    Congratulations Michael , steamy xx

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 6:05:00 AM

    Congratulations Michael on your win!Loved it on my first read.

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 1:36:00 AM

    Hey, visiting you to say CONGRATULATIONS WITH your winning poem in the contest: "Sexy Haiku" - fun contest and many good suggestions. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 10:23:00 PM

    Sexy haiku. TY, Sandy'

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 7:19:00 PM

    beautifully romantic...you are on a roll my sweet friend! Awesome haikus

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 4:37:00 PM

    nice set of haiku Michael......best wishes..

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 2:47:00 PM

    Salty Tasting Love indeed. a very romatic and sensual Haiku Suite, I enjoyed reading it. God bless you.Erich

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 11:47:00 AM

    Wow, sensual Haiku Michael, great write, and thank you for commenting on my piece. Rollo

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 9:51:00 AM

    Thumbs up for this sexy haiku you've penned my dear friend, Michael. Great pieces for the contest indeed! Good luck always! Again, I'm always thanking you for visiting my work. I am deeply touched and honored. Million thanks! More power and blessings to you always. Please give my sweet regards to your mom. love/hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 9:02:00 AM

    whew!! (^__^) nice Haiku friend Michael...Good luck in the contest..hugs, Maria

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 6:36:00 PM

    I'm going to be careful here. I do thank you for my placement in your contest. My cheeks are burning. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 3:40:00 PM

    O la la' the price is right' ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 11:21:00 AM

    GREAT take on the sexy contest, Michael. I predict a high placement.

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 7:37:00 AM

    Hot Haiku here Michael!Enjoyed.Best wishes to you.

  1. Date: 11/10/2012 5:18:00 PM

    SEXY HAIKU OO LA LA MICHAEL LUV .. EXCITING VISUAL WITH MOONLIGHT AND SILKY BODIES ..ENCORE PLEASE .. WINNING WISHES LUV .. A MICHAEL MAJESTIC MOMENT ..JG FOREVER WILL REMEMBER ..XOXO

  1. Date: 11/10/2012 5:06:00 PM

    Michael, wow I feel like crackers all of a sudden.. LOL... Talk about tasting and reading the right stuff.. I think many poets are surprising us with this contest... ha ha... after all the haiku drama a couple day ago... I bet these sexy haiku's got them all steaming out of their minds or pants... <--- get it. I'm not surprised you pulled off these haiku with an A+ ... always~ PD

  1. Date: 11/10/2012 4:18:00 PM

    Phew, the temperature is rising Michael...can't comment, I seem to have lost my breath,lol,... you really simmer with this kus..

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