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Cocoon 2

Elly Wouterse Avatar Elly Wouterse - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail Go to Poets Blog Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled Cocoon 2 which was written by poet Elly Wouterse. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Cocoon 2

a  visible hatch
the caterpillar creates
her cocoon reveals

a grand tranquil view
a butterfly shows her birth 
silence overwhelms

©Ellie Daphne van Stralen

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  1. Date: 11/12/2012 9:58:00 AM
    Simply beautiful. Michael

    Wouterse Avatar Elly Wouterse
    Date: 11/12/2012 11:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    simply TY :+)
  1. Date: 11/11/2012 11:01:00 AM
    wow, that last line is outstanding. I just love seeing haiku!!

    Wouterse Avatar Elly Wouterse
    Date: 11/12/2012 11:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    :-)
  1. Date: 11/11/2012 10:12:00 AM
    nice haiku Daphne ....enjoyed...love

    Wouterse Avatar Elly Wouterse
    Date: 11/12/2012 11:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    :-) TY Ellie Daphne
  1. Date: 11/10/2012 7:11:00 AM
    Hello dear Ellie ..... A really lovely Haiku! - Thank you for sharing it with me. - Have a nice weekend. -oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Wouterse Avatar Elly Wouterse
    Date: 11/10/2012 7:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Well....... when YOU say it is a really lovely Haiku....... means a lot to me! Ty so much and enjoy your weekend also. :-) Ellie Daphne
  1. Date: 11/10/2012 6:32:00 AM
    Nice Haiku, Ellie. Nothing like a grand entrance to the world. Beautiful. Love ya, Toquyen

    Wouterse Avatar Elly Wouterse
    Date: 11/10/2012 7:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Toquyen. Thank for reading AND commenting substansive. Like the way you express yourself: about the grand entrance..... Greetings from the Netherlands. Ellie Daphne