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Depression

sealed so deep inside
buried in an wretched soul 
huge fields of friction


©Ellie Daphne van Stralen

HAIKU 101 FOR NEWBIES TO HAIKU AND/OR POETRY SOUP CONTESTS 
Contest Judged: 11/23/2012 12:00:00 AM	
Sponsored by: Charles Henderson

Place	 Poem	 Poet

1	 Depression Ellie Daphne van Stralen

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  1. Brown Avatar
    Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 12/3/2012 6:03:00 AM
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    Congratulations on your super win in Charles' "Haiku" contest Ellie. I am sorry this is a very late comment. Love, Carol
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 11/25/2012 12:43:00 AM
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    Big congrats to you, Ellie.

    Daphne Avatar Ellie Daphne Date: 11/25/2012 2:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    BIG thanks to you Andrea!!!!!!!!!! :+) Ellie Daphne
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    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 11/24/2012 6:13:00 PM
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    Creative Haiku..Congrats..Sara

    Daphne Avatar Ellie Daphne Date: 11/25/2012 2:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank YOU Sara for your congratulation with content! :+) Ellie Daphne
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    Debbie Guzzi
    Date: 11/24/2012 6:07:00 PM
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    Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

    Daphne Avatar Ellie Daphne Date: 11/25/2012 2:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much for taking the time to comment and send your felicitations. :+) Ellie Daphne
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    Vicky Tsiluma
    Date: 11/24/2012 7:29:00 AM
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    I like how you've done this - you've managed to bring out the despair that accompanies depression with your words. Congrats on your win Ellie!

    Daphne Avatar Ellie Daphne Date: 11/24/2012 7:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Vicky - I DO appreciate your comment v e r y much........ indeed: comment with great content! TY so much!!! Ellie Daphne
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    Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 11/24/2012 5:33:00 AM
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    Big congratulations on your win, hugs xx

    Daphne Avatar Ellie Daphne Date: 11/24/2012 6:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Means a lot coming from a so often prizewinning & Awarded poet like yourself!!!!!!!!!!!! TY SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!! Ellie Daphne
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    Seren Roberts
    Date: 11/23/2012 11:34:00 PM
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    Congratulations Ellie ...Seren

    Daphne Avatar Ellie Daphne Date: 11/23/2012 11:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    TY so much!!!!!!!!!! This is "something" for me! Ellie Daphne
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 11/23/2012 6:11:00 PM
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    Ellie, congratulations with your haiku win,,, take care..pd

    Daphne Avatar Ellie Daphne Date: 11/23/2012 11:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    TY so much...... It is weird - firstprize awarded for `depression´.... Ellie Daphne
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    Suzette Crous
    Date: 11/23/2012 1:43:00 PM
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    Congratulations on your win in the haiku 101 contest, Ellie. Your employment of the headnote is artfully done. Burying friction is not healthy. Kind regards, Su

    Daphne Avatar Ellie Daphne Date: 11/23/2012 1:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Suzette: I R E A L L Y appriciate that you took the time to read and to comment with content! TY V E R Y much! Ellie Daphne
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    Anne Currin
    Date: 11/13/2012 1:31:00 AM
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    Beautiful haiku :)

    Daphne Avatar Ellie Daphne Date: 11/13/2012 1:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :+) TY
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 11/11/2012 11:03:00 AM
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    an interesting one, Ellie. thanks for your comment to me. Hope to read more of your poems when I have more time on my hands. Right now am trying to catch up on three days of comments!

    Daphne Avatar Ellie Daphne Date: 11/12/2012 11:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    That is a lot............... 3 days


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