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haiku 15

her oven opens—
bits of fruit color the dough
as flour dusts her breasts



Poet: Debbie Guzzi

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  1. Date: 11/12/2012 7:00:00 AM

    Nice imagery penned by haiku. Thanks my friend, loved always, bl

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 11:59:00 PM

    I like this haiku ,,,, I posted four of them on nature ;} Yes Debbie,,, I would like you to send soup mail,, I don't know where I post for that ;}

  1. Date: 11/10/2012 8:47:00 AM

    Hey Bet, I wrote a thank you poem for you, hope you like it.

  1. Date: 11/10/2012 5:55:00 AM

    OKAY! This one's hot! Got the fan on and still not enough! LOL Hugs, Jack xox

  1. Date: 11/10/2012 5:23:00 AM

    You sexy thang! Me Like! Hey, I know you'd want the nudge. Please read Joyce's blog ASAP. She's had a rough time! xox Dee

  1. Date: 11/10/2012 5:20:00 AM

    three soupmail today! hugs, catie :)

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 8:09:00 PM

    Perfect. ps....thank you Deb for my honored place in your Trinity contest. It cheered me very much

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 7:58:00 PM

    Baking for the xmas season already--only dust I see is the snow dust got nearly a foot today. love phyl

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 3:57:00 PM

    Interesting work..One must have been busy baking..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 3:53:00 PM

    nice write Debbie

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 2:17:00 PM

    a great write. you painted a beautiful picture here. Thanks, Jancarl

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 1:59:00 PM

    soupmail :) hugs.

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 1:20:00 PM

    Hey hey Debbie, today I am on P.S. looking, it is a long time since I've been here but now I'm here to read your Haiku, in the hope that you will read my latest Haiku, I liked your Haiku a lot. Hugs - Laila

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 12:51:00 PM

    Woow...well done Debbie. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 12:49:00 PM

    just look at this! A modern haiku! YaY! Very well done. It looks like someone has been baking. hugs, Catie :)

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 12:40:00 PM

    awesome haiku...as usual from the queen of haiku herself...oh but you are the queen of everything you do, the poetess with the midas pen...light and love and lots of huggs sent your way...

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 12:28:00 PM

    A writer of all, a master of none but...I know when I read a poem if I have enjoyed it. Now I have read yours and I have indeed enjoyed it as usual Debbie. Did you write this for SandyIvy's contest? I wish you a wonderful weekend and hope you find much inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 12:25:00 PM

    Hmmmm.....