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Broken Hearts

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Broken Hearts

Broken hearts don't always heal
Regrets may break the seal
Opened then crushed
Killed by Loves demands
Erasing all hope
No longer in command

Hearts that are damaged
Eventually will slow
After life's hardships
Repairs start to show
Tossed onto a pile
Such a sad place to go



Attempting a different style. Hope you enjoy.

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  1. Date: 11/10/2012 11:26:00 AM

    Good job, it's a relaxing form because you don't have to use meter, or rhyme. You might like to try the ABC form next? Make sure to note there are 2 different ways of doing it ;) Thanks so much for reading my work. Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/10/2012 6:08:00 AM

    Great acrostic! Must try my hand at one of these! Your first attempt was a success! Have a great B.C. day! Jack

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/10/2012 6:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks my friend
  1. Date: 11/10/2012 12:45:00 AM

    Love the new style choice, very well done :)

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/10/2012 6:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Not my favorite but I guess it is good to stretch myself. As long as I don't break anything in the process.
  1. Date: 11/9/2012 8:20:00 PM

    awee... so sad... I hate the feeling. , thank you for sharing your poem, always :-) PD

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/9/2012 11:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You are so nice for someone who is a destroyer. I think you are a sweetheart.
  1. Date: 11/9/2012 1:49:00 PM

    Well done and said. A remarkable piece of work filled with truth!

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/9/2012 1:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Marlon, I do find this particular form to be awkward but thought I would give it a try.
  1. Date: 11/9/2012 1:28:00 PM

    Hey hey Richard, today I am on P.S. looking, it is a long time since I've been here but now I'm here to read your poems, in the hope that you will read my latest poem, I liked your poem a lot. Hugs - Laila