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Supper Time

Fruit or chocolate,my favorite choice,
Chocolate with icing,fruit cake with raisin,with spice, 
Not too dry,saturated with wine,
Dinner is finished,can't wait till supper time,
For the kids,ice-cream and chocolate cake,
But a cup of coffee with fruit I will take,
Thumbs up Mamma P,this slice is great,
Keep getting better,every time you bake,
Teeth sink in,hmmmmm,savor the taste,
Hold it over a saucer,not a drop will waste,
Ants looking angry,hungry look on their face,
Sorry lads,just licked the last crumb from my plate,
Brush my teeth after some poems I read,
Yawn,good night Poetry Soup,I'm off to bed....

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  1. Date: 12/24/2012 10:47:00 AM

    Nice little time capsule you've given us. Enjoyed. -Dean

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 12/24/2012 2:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Dean,enjoy your holiday
  1. Date: 12/22/2012 1:19:00 PM

    Hmmm now I want chocolate cake! ~$ho~.

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 12/22/2012 2:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    GET A GLASS OF MILK TOO,LOL,THANKS SHONIE
  1. Date: 11/29/2012 2:08:00 PM

    Very Delicious - very creative as-well though. - "Brush my teeth after some poems I read, Yawn,good night Poetry Soup,I'm off to bed" you know this line makes it sound like the food you were eating was a bunch of different kind of poems, very nice touch - Dio

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 11/29/2012 9:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you very much Dio
  1. Date: 11/26/2012 6:05:00 PM

    Very tasty poem Richard. I enjoyed every word of it. Thanks for sharing. Thanks for your revealing the inner meaning of my Tanka Kiss of Death. Your comment is brilliant. -Mohammad

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 11/26/2012 8:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you very much Mohammad,I
  1. Date: 11/23/2012 4:45:00 AM

    Lovely, Richard. I enjoyed reading this to the max. Gave me a warm cozy feeling! :) Thanks for sharing!

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 11/24/2012 10:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    you are welcome Eileen,thanks much
  1. Date: 11/18/2012 11:14:00 PM

    hmm. this is so tasty ..good nite to you my dear poet..thank you for your great share..<3<3<3 Sk

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 11/19/2012 7:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    THANKS SK,GREAT HAVING YOU FOR SUPPER LOL
  1. Date: 11/17/2012 7:07:00 PM

    Loved reading this one. How do you get so many people to read your poetry? It's obviously good... But I couldn't find that many in a life time? Ps. When your done telling me... Please hand me some of what your eating. You made me hungry... LOL

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 11/19/2012 7:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    read and comment on as much person poems as you can and from your material is good,you got a fan,hope it helps,thanks Carol
  1. Date: 11/17/2012 2:12:00 PM

    Enjoyed reading this poem for it sounds like you have a sweet tooth too. Nothing better than coffee and cake before bed time. love phyl

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 11/17/2012 2:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Phy,rabbit tooth lol
  1. Date: 11/15/2012 6:09:00 PM

    so charming..sounds very homey! I have never been to Jamaica! LIght & Love

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 11/15/2012 6:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Debbie,its about time
  1. Date: 11/15/2012 3:30:00 PM

    Hi Richard - I'm enjoying your tasty experience through your well-crafted poem. Have to keep those ants at bay! Thanks for sharing. - Gail

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 11/15/2012 3:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    lol thanks Gail,yes we do lol
  1. Date: 11/12/2012 12:45:00 PM

    its a real nice poem Richard..yes, reminds me, i love both fruit and chocolate, yummy..and ice cream too,yummy poem.

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 11/13/2012 3:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    got sweet tooth,here to please,Mamma P bakery lol,thanks Yasmin
  1. Date: 11/12/2012 10:38:00 AM

    Warm write my friend. Nothing short of heartwarming and of course now the whole soup is hungry while you sleep lol. Enjoyed my poet brother. Michael

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 11/13/2012 3:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Michael,have enough for everyone,breakfast lol
  1. Date: 11/12/2012 10:04:00 AM

    What a way to end the day man, I like your words, awesome flow. Read ;{>

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 11/13/2012 3:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks David
  1. Date: 11/12/2012 8:07:00 AM

    Lucky I arrived at your supper time, Richard!! Jag

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 11/12/2012 8:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    you are welcome JAG,have a slice bro
  1. Date: 11/11/2012 9:02:00 PM

    Hungry were you? :) I really want chocolate cake with icing now...thanks! hahaha. I dig~ Cheers, Sharon

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 11/12/2012 5:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Sharon,come get a slice lol
  1. Date: 11/11/2012 4:09:00 PM

    ‡ Wow, Makes One Wish That They Were There, Sweet Precious Richard, That They Could Feed. These Yummy Splendours To You Themselves, Mmm, LOL. I Couldn't Help Myself Because I'm Sooo Happy And When I Sometimes Find Myself This Way, I Love To Play, LOL. This Truly Is Quite A Wonderful Painting Though And I Love The Sweetness Throughout Along With The Quaint In Cozies Feel. Very Beautiful. Thank You For Your Priceless Visit And Hope Your Heart Did Not Mind My Playfulness ? Kisses, Rachel *

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 11/11/2012 6:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    lol,not one bit,lol,thanks Rachel,hope it was after your sweet tooth
  1. Date: 11/11/2012 11:26:00 AM

    That sounds like a great tasty supper time. loved the read. yep, in my state we called it supper too. But here in Utah they call it dinner.

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 11/11/2012 2:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    lol,thanks Andrea,dinner or supper,tasty treat
  1. Date: 11/11/2012 5:45:00 AM

    enjoyed your wonderful poem Richard, love elizabeth

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 11/11/2012 8:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks much Elizabeth
  1. Date: 11/10/2012 12:45:00 PM

    Hi Richard sound absoulutly scrummy, very good write, all the best Owen

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 11/10/2012 5:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks much Owen
  1. Date: 11/10/2012 8:41:00 AM

    As I am reading your poem my wife is upstairs baking. Talk about special effects. Delicious poem Richard.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/11/2012 6:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I had my cake and ate it, delicious.
    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 11/10/2012 11:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    lol so you have your own Mamma P,LOL,enjoy your cake Richard,thanks
  1. Date: 11/10/2012 6:20:00 AM

    I'm drooling after reading this one... a scrumptious write! Cheers

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 11/10/2012 11:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    mouth water running down your beard,lol,thanks Jack
  1. Date: 11/10/2012 5:19:00 AM

    Lol, off to bed to you. Funny write, Richard. Your desserts sound yummy. Would love to have some chocolate cake right now :)) Love ya, Toquyen

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 11/10/2012 10:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    sending a slice over girl,lol,thanks much Toquyen
  1. Date: 11/9/2012 8:04:00 PM

    Richard, now I'm hungry... and my sweet tooth is acting up... , thank you for sharing your poem, always :-) PD

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 11/10/2012 8:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    hush,lol,thanks PD
  1. Date: 11/9/2012 5:33:00 PM

    Ahhh...Fruit cake is delicious this time of year..Enjoyed reading this time of year..Thanks for stopping by..Sara..Glad to know that you are diversifying and trying new forms..

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 11/10/2012 8:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    yes I am Sara thank you oxox
  1. Date: 11/9/2012 2:59:00 PM

    You men and your tummies! It's been said the way to a man's heart is through his stomach. Can't argue that! Great for a smile Richard.

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 11/9/2012 5:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    lol lol yes we are Elizabeth,thanks much
  1. Date: 11/9/2012 2:13:00 PM

    You.made me hungry. I want what the adult and kits are having; tomorrow isn't promised, but I bet a woodwork that cake is promising! Lol...you write a lot of feel good pieces; keep them coming poet!

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 11/9/2012 5:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ok Marlon,thanks,Mamma P is baking,putting your name on a slice lol
    ML Avatar SCRIBE ML Date: 11/9/2012 2:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Woodwork suppose to be slice....I'm on my phone t9 error!
  1. Date: 11/9/2012 1:10:00 PM

    Your chocolate is Devine, Richie and made me hunger, mouth watering,fruit cake saturated with wine, i will take,waiting upon supper time, with a cup of coffee and fruit, plz Mamma P keep up the good bake, two thumbs up too a great piece having ice-cream, I say who can't have your cake and eat It too!!!,I loved it. And good night, don't let the Ants bite....... Lol Lol

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 11/9/2012 5:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    THANKS CARMA,stepping on the ants lol
    Reed Avatar Carma Reed Date: 11/9/2012 2:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Like SUGAR N' SPICE...
  1. Date: 11/9/2012 12:19:00 PM

    A writer of all, a master of none but...I know when I read a poem if I have enjoyed it. Now I have read yours and I have indeed enjoyed it and your supper Richard. I wish you a wonderful weekend and hope you find much inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 11/9/2012 5:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Carol
  1. Date: 11/9/2012 12:19:00 PM

    ...... Now I got sweet ideas .... chocolate .. new boiled coffee .. chocolate .. new boiled coffee .. chocolate .... I love chocolate!!! Have a nice weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 11/9/2012 5:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    lol sweet tooth Anne,thanks much dear