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Inexperianced

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Inexperianced

Fingers barely touch
tension beneath fabric---
wet spot appears

Written by:  Richard Lamoureux for Natural/ 
originaly for Nature Sexy Haiku Contest. still a favorite

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  1. Date: 2/23/2013 9:12:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win friend Richard...(^_____^) Good day

  1. Date: 2/22/2013 6:35:00 PM
    oooh, steamy!!! (unless it is describing when a woman spurts milk from her baby touching her nursing apparatus. heehee. I used to hate that). Big congrats to you. I love this one too.

  1. Date: 2/22/2013 1:34:00 AM
    Hi congratulations Richard, great haiku, and well deserving of a winning spot...I am hoping for more time next week for more reading and commenting xx

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 2/22/2013 6:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Mandy
  1. Date: 2/21/2013 7:23:00 PM
    congrats on your win Richard

  1. Date: 2/21/2013 6:12:00 PM
    Richard ,Congratulations with your own favorite haiku. have yourself a nice one~ LINDA

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 2:41:00 PM
    Nice Haiku, Richard... Good luck in the contest... Terry

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 12:11:00 PM
    My, my... what a steamy image. You aroused my mind with your words! Good luck in the contest, although you won't need it ;)

    Currin Avatar Anne Currin
    Date: 11/10/2012 12:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Haha no don't change it I like it! I changed mine so it's not so pg 13 haha
    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 11/9/2012 12:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Only your mind? I may have to consider rewriting .)
  1. Date: 11/9/2012 11:05:00 AM
    Should do good in the contest!Enjoyed the read.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 11/9/2012 12:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Kash Appreciate you stpping by to read.
  1. Date: 11/9/2012 9:47:00 AM
    I had to laugh at this. Just for the suddenness...have you ever listened to the band The Lonely Island? They have a song called In My Pants...and this reminded me of it...if you haven't heard of them check it out their good for some laughs

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 11/9/2012 12:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I will look it up. Thanks for reading.