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Below is the poem entitled Navigating A Mind which was written by poet Joel Lee. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Navigating A Mind

It takes a self to figure
Takes a mind to navigate
To have pride less bolder
In bewilderment to never negate

Time is a forever giveaway
Promising half-truths and half chance
A nightcap from a receiving day
Have you a heart’s desire for wants?

A will to come from strength drawn
Have I the withdrawal to wander into?
A path chosen to start believing from
Have I the question if I knew?

Some days I am sad, others sadder only
Perhaps I’m more glad when I’m just sad
Touching a feel to have touch only barely
To times I have or perhaps have had

And into my mind I can only dwell
Priding myself in endless navigation
To the finding times founded I fell
I negate away that of awe to be left in bewilderment

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  1. Date: 11/9/2012 8:27:00 PM
    Joel, wow , thank you for sharing your poem, always :-) PD

    Lee Avatar Joel Lee
    Date: 11/9/2012 9:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    And thank you for reading my piece, always :)
    Lee Avatar Joel Lee
    Date: 11/9/2012 9:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


  1. Date: 11/9/2012 11:31:00 AM
    I am not a pro on any form of poetry but...I know when I read a poem if I have enjoyed it. Now I have read yours and I have indeed enjoyed it Joel. I wish you a wonderful weekend and hope you find much inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol

    Lee Avatar Joel Lee
    Date: 11/9/2012 5:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I am not a pro as well... but i'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks Carol:)
  1. Date: 11/9/2012 5:43:00 AM
    Hope you are feeling cheerful today Joel, have a beautiful day, love elizabeth

    Lee Avatar Joel Lee
    Date: 11/9/2012 5:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Elizabeth... You just did cheer me up :D
  1. Date: 11/9/2012 5:19:00 AM
    Hi Joel a nice little write here enjoyed it xx

    Lee Avatar Joel Lee
    Date: 11/9/2012 5:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Mandy... Glad you did enjoy it:)