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Au Naturel

Wood, naked to sky
Its pale shaft rising...breath caught
she takes it all in.


Written for "Natural/Nature Sexy Haiku" contest
November 9, 2012
by "Rebel Sun"

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  1. Date: 11/9/2012 11:23:00 AM

    I am not a pro on any form of poetry but...I know when I read a poem if I have enjoyed it. Now I have read yours and I have indeed enjoyed it Daniel. I wish you a wonderful weekend and hope you find much inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 7:50:00 AM

    Love the double entendre! An excellent write for the sextera contest.

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 4:57:00 AM

    A very well written haiku poem, Daniel. - Have a nice weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)