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Exposed

Lights go out, it’s black again
I can’t lie or even pretend
The hole is deep
The wounds exposed
I died your death
It clearly shows,
A garden invaded by savages
Who raped the colors and left it bare
While planting stones of mercury they burned the will to even care,
A vineyard blazing with toxic dreams,
The world I’ve known is made up of salted streams.
When comfort faded and snow kept the city numb
A new ship docked to have more fun.

By: Sabina Nicole
11/8/12

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  1. Date: 11/21/2012 7:22:00 PM

    Sounds like the rape of a planet? Happy Thanksgiving Light & Love

    Nicole Avatar Sabina Nicole Date: 11/22/2012 10:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    something like that, lol. you have a wonderful Thanksgiving Debbie
  1. Date: 11/9/2012 10:51:00 AM

    I am not a pro on any form of poetry but...I know when I read a poem if I have enjoyed it. Now I have read yours and I have indeed enjoyed it Sabina. I wish you a wonderful weekend and hope you find much inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol

    Nicole Avatar Sabina Nicole Date: 11/9/2012 1:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Wow Carol that was the best compliment ever!!! thank you so much you enjoy your weekend too:)