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Hands

Necessity sometimes demands
We use our head and not our hands
Perhaps one day our hands will be
An obsolete extremity

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  1. Date: 11/9/2012 8:04:00 AM

    I am not a pro on any form of poetry but...I know when I read a poem if I have enjoyed it. Now I have read yours and I have indeed enjoyed it Jon. I wish you a wonderful weekend and hope you find much inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 5:06:00 AM

    Love it, but with all the button pressing kids have to do I don't think thumbs will go obsolete xx Thanks for the comment Jon much appreciated xx

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh Date: 11/9/2012 5:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Good point.
  1. Date: 11/8/2012 5:03:00 PM

    Lol, too funny. What a thought. That will be something. I wonder how we are going to eat and dress ourselves. Your idea, Jon - A grand one if evolution thinks like you do :) Love ya, Toquyen

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh Date: 11/9/2012 5:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Puzzling thought. How will the floating heads be fed? By those that use their hands and not their head? I needn't worry I'll be dead.
  1. Date: 11/8/2012 3:12:00 PM

    Unfortunately, we don't use our heads enough... for some that is already an obsolete extremity... Terry (Funny poem, Jon)

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh Date: 11/9/2012 5:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    LOL, Now that's funny. Love your comment.
  1. Date: 11/8/2012 10:33:00 AM

    Well written, Jon. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh Date: 11/9/2012 5:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Anne-Lise. I hope to shed this floating green head for a real one soon.
  1. Date: 11/8/2012 9:26:00 AM

    another gem from you, jon! love it!

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh Date: 11/9/2012 5:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you ilene. I always love you comments.