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peaceful waters

a swan glides
moving my psychi through
peaceful waters

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  1. Date: 1/10/2013 8:06:00 PM

    splendid this is!!

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 7:48:00 PM

    I sent ya some soupmail, Chas.

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 3:18:00 PM

    How could I not see how you have injected yourself into this haiku? I enjoy the irony of this having to almost be labelled as 'modern', when it has a similar feel to Issa's subjective haiku written 200 years ago.

    Henderson Avatar Charles Henderson Date: 11/8/2012 4:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    How can I/we even say contemporary when Shiki was ahead of us.
    Henderson Avatar Charles Henderson Date: 11/8/2012 4:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    you read my mind. Look at the blog I just put up.
  1. Date: 11/8/2012 1:28:00 AM

    This is lovely, I like this form

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 1:21:00 AM

    This is modern. Do you see how I have injected myself into the poem.