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Intuition

listen
or be deaf for
the sound inside
you’ll hear the message loud
you’ll see everything
you need 

warning
or a  clear sign
intimate deep
surprisingly well known
a little light shines on you
inside

©Ellie Daphne van Stralen 2012

VIEWS FROM A VIGNETTE Free Poetry Contest sponsored by Nette Onclaud
11/7/2012 judged by Nette Onclaud

But her comment right below was so NICE to receive.... :-) 

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  1. Date: 11/11/2012 6:10:00 AM

    beautiful and a winner in my heart, ellie!... was just wonderif about the syllable count... :) huggs to you!

    Daphne Avatar Ellie Daphne Date: 11/11/2012 6:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    YOu call 'moi' - I quote: a winner in in my heart'. YOU made my day! :-) :-) :-) Ellie Daphne
    onclaud Avatar nette onclaud Date: 11/11/2012 6:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    was just *WONDERING*
  1. Date: 11/8/2012 2:57:00 PM

    I agree completely with Susan, we women do aquire intuition! I always listen to mine, it comes in handy :) great write!

    Daphne Avatar Ellie Daphne Date: 11/10/2012 6:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Ty you for reading and the comment. I am appreciative for the fact you took the time for both! :-) Ellie daphne
  1. Date: 11/8/2012 10:51:00 AM

    yes, a woman has a great intuition! We need to listen to it more often.

    Daphne Avatar Ellie Daphne Date: 11/10/2012 6:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    sometime it takes courage to hear a n d listen to that 'sound'........
  1. Date: 11/7/2012 3:05:00 PM

    wonderful verse Ellie, love elizabeth

    Daphne Avatar Ellie Daphne Date: 11/8/2012 12:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    TY so much for taking the time to read a n d comment. I really appreciate! Elle Daphne