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HURRICANE


storm's debris-- in a crying child's hand a smiling one legged doll

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  1. Date: 2/23/2013 4:19:00 PM

    A strong image. Congratulations, Yesha.

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 10:56:00 AM

    great haiku friend Yesha :) Congratulations on your win :)

  1. Date: 2/22/2013 6:32:00 PM

    you know I have always loved this one. Congrats to you on your win. Nice seeing you on several winners lists today.

  1. Date: 2/21/2013 7:18:00 PM

    Loved this well done ....Seren

  1. Date: 2/21/2013 6:11:00 PM

    Yesha,Congratulations with your own favorite haiku. have yourself a nice one~ LINDA

  1. Date: 1/21/2013 6:58:00 PM

    Really like this haiku! Good imagery.

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 2:46:00 PM

    Yesha,,,hey congrats on this winner! I have to agree with the rest of our writing friends that this is such a powerful image...U wrote this one SO VERY WELL! Hope u are doing great, dear! Luv, gwendolen

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 7:58:00 AM

    Yesha, I'm glad to see you back. Yippeee!! I doubt I will find an old poem of yours I have not read yet with only three minutes remaining before I have to go upstairs and leave for work, but I sure hope you have some festival poetry to post for us SOON. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 4:22:00 AM

    congrads Yeshooo..best haiku I ever read...wow..

  1. Date: 11/14/2012 10:26:00 AM

    i am stunned by the visuals of this piece, yesh.. you are awesome, wow!... winning huggs!..:)

    onclaud Avatar nette onclaud Date: 11/14/2012 10:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    and big congrats!
  1. Date: 11/12/2012 2:53:00 PM

    Wow Yesha, this is excellent poetry, 3 lines, and the tragic storm unfolds....

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 2:08:00 AM

    Very touching haiku!Congrats! Hugs- Laila ;o)

  1. Date: 11/10/2012 6:23:00 PM

    Yesha, :-) CONGRATULATIONS!!! Enjoyed stopping by to read all the hurricane haiku... every winner on this list had a mind blowing image... take care~ Always* PD

  1. Date: 11/10/2012 3:16:00 PM

    love this powerful haiku. Thanks for your kind words, my friend

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 10:35:00 AM

    Very glad to see you in the winners circle with this haiku Yesha!Congrats!

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 7:41:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in the Hurricane Haiku contest Yesha. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 5:50:00 AM

    Wow, clever thoughts expressed so well--congrats!

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 1:44:00 AM

    Congratulations on your winning poem in Hurricanes contest, well done!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 12:07:00 AM

    BIG congrats, and I'd have placed this one higher!!

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 11:49:00 PM

    CONGRATS ANNE-LISE ON A GRAND WIN FOR A GREAT WRITE OF HURRICANE FORCE LUV .. SO HAPPY TO SEE U ON WINNERS LIST WITH YOUR WONDERFUL WORDS .. I AM STILL HAVING PROBLEMS ON PS TRYING TO COMMENT BACK TO POETS .. SORRY LUV .. I MISS ALL.

    poet Avatar kash poet Date: 11/9/2012 11:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :)))))))
  1. Date: 11/8/2012 11:45:00 PM

    CONGRATS YESHA ON A GRAND WIN FOR A GREAT WRITE ON HURRICANE LUV.. CONGRATS ON ALL OTHER WINS TOO .. WE LOST POWER FOR 2 DAYS DUE TO SNOWSTORM ON TOP OF HURRICANE LAST WEEK AND WTH ALL THE PROBLEMS I AM HAVING COMMENTING TO POETS ON PS .. WHAT ELSE LUV??

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 8:02:00 PM

    thank you' san

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 1:16:00 PM

    Sad one..It brings the tragedy down to home..Enjoyed reading your work that is sure to be in the winners' list...Thanks for your encouraging review..Sara

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 9:50:00 AM

    Very touching haiku! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 2:09:00 AM

    Very good haiku here Yesha.Good capture of an after storm moment.Best wishes to you.

  1. Date: 11/7/2012 3:44:00 PM

    this is poignant, and a wonderful haiku. Better than many of the entries I have seen, mine included!

  1. Date: 11/7/2012 1:08:00 PM

    Superb juxto in this contest entry....I can envision this sad moment so clearly! luv, gwendolen

  1. Date: 11/7/2012 11:00:00 AM

    So touching Haiku Yesha, well written! Have a nice day. - oxox - / / Anne-Lise :)