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Dense Fog

Dense fog Sunrise hidden Cold penetrates Three golden pears still hang Waiting their time of ripeness The owl hoots
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  1. Date: 11/7/2012 4:35:00 PM

    This one is perfect my friend! I really enjoyed reading this illustrious and wondrous poem this evening! By the way, this one you did have three syllables at the end of the write! This is a perfect, true to form Vignette Sara, and quite beautiful to boot! What a delightful and pleasant piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 11/7/2012 3:50:00 PM

    I like the little things happening all at once in this one!