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David for David

Oh David, King David
You slew the mocking monster
You cheated
You murdered
You repented
You were forgiven
You were chosen...
composing mighty music
begging deliverance
fearing His wrath
pleading mercy...
May He show such mercy to us

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  1. Date: 11/15/2012 11:23:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Cyndi's "David's for David" contest Tim. Love, Carol ~David~ is sure to love every one of the poems written.

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 9:18:00 AM

    Very beautiful poem/song! A lovely dedication and i love it! Congratulations on your "super win" my dear friend Tim! love/hugs, LG

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 12:51:00 AM

    Congratulations on another win Tim, well done xx

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 4:57:00 PM

    nice tribute Tim...congrats on your win.. well penned

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 4:02:00 PM

    Tim. love the dedication for David.. take care~ PD

  1. Date: 11/7/2012 8:53:00 AM

    I did not realize that I had not commented on this one..Great work..Sara ...Soup mail..

  1. Date: 11/7/2012 3:56:00 AM

    Bit of a king .... well written for this contest Tim. - Good luck - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/7/2012 3:28:00 AM

    passionate explosion of the senses, tim, without the cumbersome of exposition.. best wishes and huggs !..:)