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Inlook

The rain ran up the window pane
The sun as black as night
The heat was so cold
The water was so tight.

Falling down rising into the sky
My tears of blood
My blood of ice....

Everything perfectly in its place
My heart is like a puzzle
A door without a key
I am so blind as I see.

I understand confusion
So simple yet so hard
Sinking while I ascend it all....

The silence is so loud
My breath will not come out
I’m sleeping wide awake
Standing still as I walk around.

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  1. Date: 11/7/2012 12:19:00 AM

    Heartfelt write Andrea...enjoy your poem very much ..thank you for your nice share...have a fabulous day..<3<3<3 SK

  1. Date: 11/7/2012 12:12:00 AM

    ‡ Something Aside From Your Mesmerizing Beauty, Sweet Beautiful Andrea, That Touched My Heart Quite Deeply. You Remind Myself Of A Girl I Loved Very Much! Sounds Like The Either Or Within The Moment Known Unto The Catholic Church As Possession ? Don't Play With Any Ouji Boards, Sweet Beautiful Girl, LOL. You Know I Truly Love 'The Beauty' I Find In You, Sooo Very Much. Sweet Kisses To You, Dipped In Love, Rachel *

  1. Date: 11/6/2012 7:14:00 PM

    love this one very much!!