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Beneath Death's Dark Veil

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Beneath Death's Dark Veil

Wednesday, October 31, 2012
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A careless Swathing of Death's face- pale
Burn the images and erase the memories
Bury the lies beneath Death's dark veil

Dig deep- finding secrets beneath the remains
Salty tears pierce the bloodless veins
Hiding the lies beneath Death's dark veil

Burn the soul and leave the remains
Speak your filthy words-never escape the chains
Live beneath Death's dark veil

cover the truth- with a fairy's tale
Revive the breakage-but it's far too late to mend the damage
All will be revealed once you enter hell beneath Death's dark veil

Your useless sorrow buried with lies
And still you refuse to hear the burning cries
And the truth remains-left decaying beneath Death's dark veil

Burn the remains-bury your life
Give in to the world of never ending strife
Lose yourselves in the void-far beneath Death's dark veil

Never strive for much- always fail
Wondering what has become of this empty life
Receiving a decayed response of ash in the depths of Death's dark veil

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  1. Date: 11/6/2012 1:30:00 PM

    I like the certainty with which you describe the shelter of confusion in our lives Rebecca - good use of repitition too - reminds me of the death of coloful dreams - J.A.B. %

  1. Date: 11/6/2012 12:00:00 AM

    Powerful and endurable mastahpiece. The repition of Death's Dark Veil really does shape and regenerate the overall darkness of the poem. Now that I put my sohphisticated input--your poem was awesometasticallysnaperifically-positively awesomebeans with a side order of ramen noodles. ^^ Always, Laura

    Larkin Avatar Rebecca Larkin Date: 11/6/2012 12:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    hahahha yaay ramen noodles :D love yah Laurakins haha thankieez :)
    Breidenthal Avatar Laura Breidenthal Date: 11/6/2012 12:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    repetition*! D: