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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/1/2013 10:13:00 AM

Oh my, this ended up so sad! But your poem is really good. An extended metaphor beautifully done!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/2/2012 2:51:00 PM

Nice to read your work today Rebecca fav line [ I should have sung the blues..boy do I relate!] Light & Love

Joe Inca

Date: 12/1/2012 11:45:00 PM

I love how the theme stays tied to the music but allows the reader to drift into seamless paralellls in other areas of life well done thank you

John Posey

Date: 11/23/2012 6:32:00 PM

Your search for something to complete your song is an emotion I can really relate to. You are so talented and I'm certain you will succeed. Nice Rhythm and Rhyme pattern.... Jake BTW... You will find me in the same boat in my search for songs..."Two -- Searching For A Song" "Have All The Songs Been Written" "They've Written All My Songs" are a few you might enjoy... Love Ya, Jake

david scott

Date: 11/20/2012 11:14:00 AM

YOU STILL HAVE POETRY MY FRIEND AND COOL POETRY TOO IM SURE YOU WILL FIND THOSE WORDS LOVE YOUR WRITE XX DAVIDSCOTT

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 11/18/2012 6:59:00 AM

A song in a poem or a poem in a song, that is the question... all good from all angles...love it.... Michael

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/13/2012 5:30:00 PM

Hi Rebecca Dropped over to see how you are doing. Hope you had a good long weekend. Rick

Gail Angel Doyle

Date: 11/11/2012 9:11:00 AM

Love your poem a great deal. The words itself flow like a song in your delightful poem. Thank you for congratulating me on my first place win in Michael's contest. Hugs, Gail

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/11/2012 6:25:00 AM

A very different way to write that love loss verse..Enjoyed reading the creativity of it..Sara

Becca Lucas Date: 11/11/2012 6:33:00 AM

thank you Sara :)

jim joyce

Date: 11/9/2012 10:46:00 PM

a special piece of writing ..its hard not to feel yur sadness:)))..love reading yur poems ..jj

Becca Lucas Date: 11/11/2012 6:33:00 AM

thanks JJ

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/6/2012 7:18:00 AM

A great write and very enjoyable read Rebecca. Love, Carol

Becca Lucas Date: 11/11/2012 6:31:00 AM

thank you Carol

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/5/2012 4:13:00 PM

Rebecca this is sad, I so wish for you to sing a happy song. A heart like yours deserves to be loved fully. If you have not found that love I am sure it will arrive soon. Another Gem, well written. You know how to evoke emotion. Second last stanza change though to thought.

Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/9/2012 7:21:00 PM

Your welcome, I didn't want it to detract from your excellent message.

Becca Lucas Date: 11/5/2012 5:39:00 PM

thanks Richard, for your kind comments. Thank you for pointing out my typo as well, I appreciate that. Take care :)

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