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She Don't Know

She's so captivating that she has my eyes wide like a hawk
  But as always I'm contemplating maybe she thinks I'm a dork
  I never quite know what to say to her and mutter every word
  Everything becomes a blur, then it feels like I can't be heard

And then I'm trying to keep my composure, show I'm still there
But she probably just thinks I'm a poser with her every stare
Laying on the charm, but I bet she's thinking I have no chance
Though I'm no smarm, yeah I'm just looking for some romance

Some might snigger but it's how it feels when she passes by
The flicker of her eye lashes, is what always captures my eye
Because yeah she has these amazing blue eyes' that gleam
I can't stop gazing, there like the skies the bluest I've ever seen

It's the intrigue the not knowing what the other persons thinking
Maybe she's way out of my league but if only I had some inkling
I really want to ask her out, should I put it in a letter to show?
If I told her how I felt would be better, because she don't know


A poem inspierd by a girl I met at shop back in 2007 june july or though 
had seen her before hand was to scared to aproach her
she realy was very captivating but got to know her changed my view
i wrote a follow up to this called she knows  

not as good as others ive wrote like one of a kind sublime ill be
with you worlds apart etc  but this one giving more enferce on her
again adding houmour and word play i think alot of people have been 
in similer situation and could relate also/ she knows DONT KNOW

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  1. Date: 11/29/2012 12:03:00 PM

    Enjoyed your poem David, did you ever get to ask her out, love Elizabeth

  1. Date: 11/5/2012 6:49:00 PM

    they say beauty captures the eye, but personality captures the heart...nice poem...shame she changed your view, but if she inspired poetry, it was worth it in the end! Take care and have a great day!

  1. Date: 11/5/2012 1:21:00 PM

    Awww this is sweet. ^..^ You mus be confident! You got this! ;) *wink* I love this poem. I am sure many can relate. Always, Laura