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faminey guy



the dying man gathered his toys
gathered his joys
gathered his daughter and his
boys
the dying man gathered his sheep
he burnt them all
he did not weep
he told his son to draw his knife
to kill his wife
the weeping bird
comands unheard
forsook him there
him and his word
the dyin man did not weep
he wished his daughter and his
sheep
to leave that town
they let him down
he closed his eyes
alone he dies

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  1. Date: 11/5/2012 7:47:00 AM

    Thank you dear friends. It's a great honour to see your kind comments

  1. Date: 11/5/2012 7:05:00 AM

    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Ebrahim. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/4/2012 8:31:00 PM

    Welcome to PoetrySoup! Nice work.

  1. Date: 11/4/2012 4:13:00 PM

    love how this poem flows great write...

  1. Date: 11/4/2012 4:12:00 PM

    love how this poem flows great write...

  1. Date: 11/4/2012 4:12:00 PM

    love how this poem flows great write...