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AMONG THE TREES

sleeping dead,among the trees,
a man was seen
The hand daring to touch him first was hand of god,among the trees.
Among the trees the man did stir
But no eye saw and none did care
but eye of god among the trees.
Among the trees a man said: Help,
 a man did nod
And gushed his blood
But no one helped,nor hands of God,among the trees.

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  1. Date: 3/20/2013 2:47:00 PM

    You have a unique style Ebrahim. Trauma can be paralyzing. Keep writing my friend. Thank yo for your visit and kind words. Deb

    SHARIFAT Avatar EBRAHIM SHARIFAT Date: 3/29/2013 6:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks so much dear Deb for your kind comment. i sure will :) you keep the nice job too :)
  1. Date: 11/4/2012 3:00:00 PM

    Oh :( this is sad... I'm glad to see you on here... I'm looking forwad to reading more

    SHARIFAT Avatar EBRAHIM SHARIFAT Date: 11/4/2012 3:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :( facts. Thank you. glad to see you, too dear friend.