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Five String Lament

I’m just a lonely banjo hangin' on the wall of a lonesome mountain cabin as summer turns to fall. I’m looking for a red hot picker, hoping one will call, I’m a five string banjo frettin’ don’t that just beat all? The bachelor Forest Ranger who lives here in this place, is a man with grit and gumption and a smile upon his face. Oh, surely he is nice enough, don’t get me wrong - you see - he decided pluckin' banjo was not his cup of tea. So I pass away the hours thinking of the time that a bluegrass picking wizard sent shivers up my spine. I pine for couples dancing square like they did in the olden days when banjos, hicks and fiddles chased the nights away. I’m looking for a damn good picker who’s inclined to set a spell, who’ll grab the picks and give me licks ‘cause I’m living in a banjo hell. I’m out of tune, my bridge is weak but give me one more chance lay me down some tight clawhammer and I’ll lay you down some dance. I remember all the good times at some raucous county fair playing with some good old boys that was tearing up the air. I’m just a lonely banjo hanging on a wall, for me the lack of frailing is like a gallows call.

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  1. Date: 1/1/2013 6:50:00 AM

    Wonderfully personified. Enjoyed the flow of rhymes. Regards, Mehnaz

  1. Date: 11/19/2012 3:19:00 AM

    The battle of banjo is related to the battle of life. Nice one though it's sad. Thanks for your comment. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 11/10/2012 8:59:00 AM

    "I’m a five string banjo frettin’" Sure can relate to this one, my friend! Played banjo as part of a six person folk singing group back in the early 60s. We were called strangely enough, The Canadiana Folksingers, and patterned ourselves after The New Christy Minstrels! Appeared of TV and made a couple of LPs... great memories! Jake

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 8:28:00 PM

    What an irresistible story; makes me sad for instruments abandoned. So many memories tied up in those years when being played and a banjo is sure a toe tapping sound that seems to have lost it's popularity these days. Perfection reigns in this one!

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 7:57:00 PM

    Dear John, I've been helping my Dad with his chemo so don't have much time to write... Give your bajo a few crickets... See my "The Postman Cometh"... You'll understand. LOL...

  1. Date: 11/6/2012 10:57:00 PM

    Ah..Yes! The banjo...I grew up hearing those fine works in my younger years.Loved'um... Nothing like "The battle of the banjos"...Twas a favorite song of mine.

  1. Date: 11/5/2012 8:43:00 AM

    poor ole banjo. Dust it off and twang. love your poem and your rhyme Kathy

  1. Date: 11/4/2012 11:58:00 AM

    Do not let it hang on the wall and collect dust .... use it, play - like your poem, very well written. - Have a nice Sunday afternoon. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/4/2012 11:53:00 AM

    Sure enjoyed this one John..Your rhymes are good..not forced. BG