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RP LOVE

Struck, by the ways, of a Richness 
Paradise cave, within your soul, I 
directly stare, at the eyes of my 
prey, convicted to consume you, 
tastefully,I ate for loves blood, 
Rapidly Pulsing, the touch, of your 
paws, gras ply, gripping to crop my 
body, Rawly and Provocatively, as I 
scream, to live, among the lands, 
humbly for you are that twizzler I 
can't resist, Like A piece of RP LOVE candy....

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  1. Date: 11/9/2012 8:29:00 AM

    Really wonderful expression of a glaring and intrinsic kind of corruption. Lovely done, my friend. Thanks for reading and for your wonderful comment on my writes. Loved always, bl

    Reed Avatar Carma Reed Date: 11/10/2012 6:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Your so welcome, and thank you bl always Carma
  1. Date: 11/7/2012 5:18:00 AM

    hey you,lol,nice write Carma

    Reed Avatar Carma Reed Date: 11/7/2012 10:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hey me, lol thanks Richie always glad to put a smile ta yuh face..... Xoxoxo Carma
  1. Date: 11/3/2012 10:48:00 PM

    Hi, Carma,,, lol...i love the luscious ending... xox~pd

    Reed Avatar Carma Reed Date: 11/4/2012 9:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Lol,,, thanks PD,,, you know me, gotta keep it hottttttt n' sweet!!!!!