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Pala

ablaze
a sink of fire
volcanic rouge
raw maw, sole biter, coal
mindful I walk, suspended 
upon pain

passage
gladly given
Pala’s sister
bleeds in birth rivulets
mountain maker, latent womb
spew man kind



Poet: Debbie Guzzi
Contest: View from a Vignette


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  1. Date: 11/11/2012 5:05:00 PM

    WAy to go, Debs. This reminds me of another one I think I saw you once write about volcanos. RAW MAW. Awesome.

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 10:56:00 AM

    Lady, CONGRATULATIONS, in Nette's "VIEWS FROM A VIGNETTE" contest.. Keep up the good work... always~ PD

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 8:16:00 PM

    CONGRATS DEBBIE ON A FABULOUS WIN FOR A MAJESTIC VIGNETTE LUV .. ALWAYS GLORIOUS WORK ..

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 5:40:00 PM

    Knew it was a winner..Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 10:20:00 AM

    Excellent take on the contest photo Debi!Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 8:06:00 AM

    congratulations to you dear Alizaabet on your winning spree...as always I am inspired by you...light love and lots of huggs.,.

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 8:06:00 AM

    Another superb win Debbie, congratulations xx hope you are keeping warm xx

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 7:48:00 AM

    Love your take on this Debbie!

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 7:24:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in the Vignette contest Debbie. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/7/2012 3:56:00 PM

    awesome, you went volcanic with yours!!

  1. Date: 11/6/2012 3:14:00 AM

    Great entry for the contest Debbie. loved the read.

  1. Date: 11/5/2012 4:02:00 PM

    What a phenomenal write. Soup mail coming... :)

  1. Date: 11/4/2012 6:28:00 PM

    I would not wish to cross her. Powerful image.

  1. Date: 11/4/2012 7:21:00 AM

    Imaginative...nice

  1. Date: 11/4/2012 7:21:00 AM

    I will have to check out that contest...Great work..Reads like winning material..Thanks for stopping by..I appreciate the time spent at my work..Sara

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 5:51:00 PM

    Spoken like a true warrior my dear, glad you got heat, love, vie

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 4:59:00 PM

    Gorgeous poem, Debbie! - Luck in contest - hugs / / Anne-Lise :)