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Whats Your Fear

The fear of my heart stopping, when I first say hello.
But worse would be if yours stopped, what a way to go
The fear of not seeing you after all of this long time
That fear is the greatest, that would surely be a crime

The fear of you not liking me, I’m a disillusionment
A fear of you finding, I was not from heaven sent.
A fear of something happening to stop me meeting you
A fear of all these things, what would I now do?

The biggest fear of all would be liking you too much
What would I do then, if sparks flew when our hands touch.
The fears they are just growing to proportions that are phobic
Perhaps I should concentrate on certain things more aerobic.

Deep breaths in to calm the heart, reduce the blood pressure too
And rubber gloves to catch the sparks, if I ever do meet you.
They say face your fears to cure them, that’s what I intend to do
Looking forward to that day whenever I meet you...
© ~GG~2?11/2102

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  1. Date: 11/29/2012 11:22:00 AM
    A very belated congratulations in this Fear contest Mandy. Love, Carol

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 11/29/2012 11:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi carol, not a problem but thanks for sending them. I know life gets in the way sometimes sweetie xx
  1. Date: 11/19/2012 11:28:00 AM
    Mandy, Congratulations with your thought provoking poem In Tanya's "What's Your Fear?" contest. Have yourself a nice sweet day.. always~ PD

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 11/19/2012 11:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Pd xx back at you sweetie
  1. Date: 11/18/2012 5:16:00 PM
    Congrats Mandy loved it ... Seren

  1. Date: 11/17/2012 2:39:00 PM
    congrats, on this deserved winner.....

  1. Date: 11/17/2012 1:24:00 PM
    Hey, i see you scored!!! Congrats, Mandy! I remember this one well.

  1. Date: 11/16/2012 10:55:00 PM
    Very wistful, Mandy girl. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 11/16/2012 10:36:00 PM
    CONGRATS MANDY ON THIS STUNNING WRITE AND STELLAR WIN LUV .. THANKXX FOR ALL YOUR WARM AND WELCOME CONGRATS TO ME ..

  1. Date: 11/16/2012 9:42:00 PM
    congrats on your win with this gem cory

  1. Date: 11/16/2012 4:18:00 PM
    congrats on your win Mandy...nicely done

  1. Date: 11/6/2012 8:36:00 AM
    Dear MandyTams, You are very well versed in Quatrains I do not know why I have not read YOU before I feel a connection to YOUR POETRY I have Read so far (2 POEMS) I am at the Library and my time is almost up I Hope to get a few more comments in If not I'll be back in an hour LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...HG (HarrY)

  1. Date: 11/6/2012 1:14:00 AM
    Absolutely brilliant addition to the contest! Best of luck, tough you may not need it! I'm very impressed with your work! Always, Laura

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 11/6/2012 1:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Laura I appreciate that xx
  1. Date: 11/5/2012 3:18:00 PM
    gosh, I could have sworn I had seen and commented to this one before but I see no comment below from me. this is GREAT entry for the contest. Love how you did your approach, mandy.

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 11/6/2012 1:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    xx
  1. Date: 11/5/2012 1:22:00 PM
    Its the wanting to be that hurts us so much.

  1. Date: 11/5/2012 10:31:00 AM
    Well written Mandy. Thanks for sharing your poem. And thank you for the congrats on my win.

  1. Date: 11/4/2012 1:01:00 PM
    lol, thought provoking indeed, my friend - thanks for all your kindness xx

  1. Date: 11/4/2012 11:45:00 AM
    This is a good one on an interesting theme..Great presentation of the idea..Thanks for stopping by...Sara

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 11:13:00 AM
    I love every word you used to describe your fears my friend, Mandy. It's fascinating write which I enjoy reading tonight. I can also say that I can relate on your third stanza :)). A great piece indeed and a winner for me! thank you for sharing! Have a grace-filled day always! love/hugs:) Leonora

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 11/3/2012 11:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Leo you are a pal xx
  1. Date: 11/2/2012 4:01:00 PM
    Beautiful Rhyme, Mandy! Well written too. If for the contest, maybe you need just one go over-3rd stanza..I'm sure you meant "too" much. Enjoy your weekend! Love, Annalise

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 11/3/2012 3:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I surely did and thanks Annalise. have a wonderful weekend yourself too xx
  1. Date: 11/2/2012 3:01:00 PM
    If your fear can produce wonderful poetry like this, you have nothing to fear, Mandy if for the contest, good luck....

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 11/3/2012 11:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    to kind harry xx
  1. Date: 11/2/2012 1:21:00 PM
    Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today I have enjoyed reading it. Have a great weekend Mandy. Love, Carol

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