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Three Times In An Hour

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Three Times In An Hour

Lying there feeling warm and replete 
Looking up to the sky, this is real neat
I never thought-that I would see three
But that was just granted to little old me.

The first as I lay in the water so hot
It flashed through the sky, a plane it was not 
Within twenty minutes the second one flashed by
Two shooting stars in the same bit of sky…

Before the hour was up the third came into view
What a brilliant night watching the stars that flew
Three shooting stars is my first hat trick of stars
Lying in hot tub they shot from the plough right past Mars.

Three shooting stars I wonder what that means
Were they tumblers or stars, or somebody’s dreams
A wish I would make on each star that passed by
But they still couldn’t match the stars I’d see in your eye.
© 1/11/2012 ~GG~

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  1. Date: 12/18/2012 5:57:00 AM

    Enjoyed your poem. Wow, Three shooting stars in one night and a twinkle in a special someone's eye. I hope your wishes came true.

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 12/18/2012 6:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    working on it lol xx
  1. Date: 11/6/2012 3:08:00 PM

    wow,what a cool poem!! and for this to happen. I'd love to see this in the sky!!

  1. Date: 11/6/2012 8:44:00 AM

    Dear MandyTams, Superb Verse I see the copyright is dated 1/11/2102 next time YOU go to the Future Please take me with YOU Love ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...HG (Harry)

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 11/6/2012 8:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi there, thanks for letting me know and thanks for your lovely comments they are much appreciated. xx
  1. Date: 11/4/2012 9:22:00 PM

    WOW! This is very romantic, shooting stars and all. I like that. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

  1. Date: 11/4/2012 1:03:00 PM

    LOL, with that title, I wondered what this was going to be about!! Lovely write, Mandy

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 11:16:00 AM

    Wow! This is another amazing write my dear friend! I love it! All the best always! love/hugs:) LG

  1. Date: 11/2/2012 12:43:00 PM

    This is such a beautiful written poem,Mandy.Its a pleasure to read,and one that you wanna read over and over again.Have a peaceful and great weekend my friend:-) xox~Arild

  1. Date: 11/2/2012 10:06:00 AM

    Ahh!!I enjoyed reading this one today..I am glad that I chose it to read..Sara

  1. Date: 11/2/2012 8:29:00 AM

    Beautifully writen. Inspiration can bring out the best in us.

  1. Date: 11/2/2012 4:43:00 AM

    Beautiful poem and such rich imagery painted here. Very well concluded with that super last line Mandy. Loved the read. Many thanks for your congratulatory notes always at my pages.

  1. Date: 11/2/2012 4:20:00 AM

    I too love the last line, a clever write and well penned!! Jag

  1. Date: 11/1/2012 11:10:00 PM

    Oh Mandy this is so lovely. Every line is a gem, I loved the last line.

  1. Date: 11/1/2012 4:55:00 PM

    i love to sit out at night and watch the shooting stars in the sky. So much heaven's to look at and then comes the beautiful northern lights dancing across the sky. Awesome sight and a wonderful poem you have penned. love phyl

  1. Date: 11/1/2012 4:51:00 PM

    An excellent piece you have shared with us Mandy. I have enjoyed reading it this afternoon. Will be back soon to read more. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/1/2012 4:28:00 PM

    Mandy i use to do this very thing in New Zealand, lay in the spar(hot tub) and watch the shooting stars, the night skies there were wonderful, so many shooting stars one run out of wishes... lovely poem is this, again you show such knowledge in your subject matter...oh and talking about wishes.,.,,, I wish.............

  1. Date: 11/1/2012 2:44:00 PM

    Hi Mandy, wow.... nice image of the shooting stars..always~pd

  1. Date: 11/1/2012 1:59:00 PM

    An awesome write in rhyme, Mandy. I like it. -Mohammad

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 11/1/2012 2:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Mohammad I appreciate that xx