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Gogyoka

Gogyoka

It’s fine
That its
Five free lines
Have got
A  name.

28/oct/12

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  1. Date: 11/21/2012 9:40:00 PM

    Jag,, Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*

  1. Date: 11/7/2012 12:41:00 PM

    I really researched this form last week right before my internet went kerplunk...very clever write, Jag...it seems a lot of political humor used this Japanese form that is expressed as "one breath per line". Did u place with this?...will have to go back and check. :)

    Nair Avatar S.Jagathsimhan Nair Date: 11/15/2012 7:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Was not for the contest, Gwen.
  1. Date: 11/3/2012 1:27:00 PM

    Cute one...Got a chuckle..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 7:47:00 AM

    Good and witty!Enjoyed very much.

  1. Date: 11/2/2012 4:54:00 AM

    And a nice one too...Gogyoka. Quite some name.