whipping fury by craig cornish

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/8/2012 8:04:00 PM

soup mail

Date: 11/15/2012 3:45:00 PM

[the wind/ whips the sea to froth -- boats splinter] now you are simply restating lines 1 & 2 use your line 3 to give us something else a scent, a sound, a taste even another image..congrad's Craig BIG HUGS Light & Love

craig cornish Date: 11/15/2012 4:11:00 PM

love ya Deb but Haiku in it's most restrictive form is of no interest to me---no offense please--but one of those pursuits I chose not to chase--we all have them, "real haiku gives me a headache!!!!!!!!!!!

Debbie Guzzi Date: 11/15/2012 3:46:00 PM

though my line 3 maybe too cause and affect we must stay away from that!

Modupe Sefunmi

Date: 11/12/2012 4:50:00 AM

Congrats on your win!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/10/2012 6:17:00 PM

Craig, :-) talk about haiku.... what a furious image you got going on here... what happened to the 5 sense ..LOL..you destroyed them all with the imagery of this haiku... what a win... always~pd

Seren Roberts

Date: 11/10/2012 11:16:00 AM

congratulations Craig....Seren

Joann Grisetti

Date: 11/10/2012 8:14:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning haiku.

kash poet

Date: 11/9/2012 10:41:00 AM

Congrats Craig on your win with this very nice haiku!

yasmin khan

Date: 11/9/2012 8:01:00 AM

precise and to the point, congrads on a fab win Craig...you been unleashing your talent on us..

Heather Ober

Date: 11/9/2012 7:59:00 AM

Craig, congratulations on your well-deserved win! You pack so much feeling and imagery into these short lines. Very well done indeed :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/9/2012 7:30:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in the Hurricane Haiku contest Craig. Love, Carol

Ellie Daphne

Date: 11/9/2012 2:23:00 AM

Few words......... felt all over Huge congrats coming from the Netherlands. Ellie Daphne.

Anne Lise Andresen

Date: 11/9/2012 1:38:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning poem in Hurricanes contest, well done!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 11/9/2012 1:19:00 AM

Big congrats on your win Craig and your bbq, it went down a storm. Only dropped one shrimp too. xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/8/2012 11:56:00 PM

Congratulations, Craig. You showed exactly the picture of a hurricane.

Linda-Marie SweetHeart

Date: 11/8/2012 8:22:00 PM

CONGRATS CRAIG ON A GRAND FIRST PLACE WIN LUV FOR AN INCREDIBLE VIEW OF HURRICANE.

Sandy Ivy D

Date: 11/8/2012 7:59:00 PM

Thank you' San

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/5/2012 3:34:00 PM

well done, craig. I am still working on mine!

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 11/4/2012 12:33:00 AM

Ooooooh! Awesome piece here. So little words, but exeedingly powerful all the same. Haiku in that affect, is more than awesome. Love how you worded this. Always, Laura

Maria Paz Samelo

Date: 11/3/2012 11:50:00 PM

the wrath of nature..hope everything is fine..awesome haiku friend Craig. thanks for sharing. hugs. Maria

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/3/2012 11:41:00 PM

Craig, wow.... hope this is for the hurricane contest..pd

Linda-Marie SweetHeart

Date: 11/3/2012 12:51:00 AM

having just experienced these lines u penned craig .. very visual and real depicting 'Sandy" and her wrath .. great imagery luv .. thankxx so much for my win and place in Sleepwalk .. it is an honor to be among such premier poets on the list .. glad u enjoyed my lyrics ..

nette onclaud

Date: 11/3/2012 12:47:00 AM

you leave no stone unturned here, craig... great 'ku; such wrath.. thanks for considering my sleepwalk piece...:) hugggs!

Leonora Galinta

Date: 11/1/2012 10:31:00 AM

Outstanding Haiku, Craig! That's what nature do sometimes. Thanks for sharing and your congratulatory comments on my win. I hope everything is alright with you and your family there across the miles. love/hugs:)Leonora

harry horsman

Date: 11/1/2012 6:51:00 AM

nature certainly did, over there Craig, hope you and your family are safe, love this Haiku

ilene bauer

Date: 10/31/2012 5:38:00 PM

yes! very well said.

Anne Lise Andresen

Date: 10/31/2012 4:15:00 PM

Well written haiku, Craig - help each other after storm damage. - Hope all is well with you. - - Have a nice afternoon. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

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