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  1. Date: 12/8/2012 8:04:00 PM
    soup mail

  1. Date: 11/15/2012 3:45:00 PM
    [the wind/ whips the sea to froth -- boats splinter] now you are simply restating lines 1 & 2 use your line 3 to give us something else a scent, a sound, a taste even another image..congrad's Craig BIG HUGS Light & Love

    Cornish Avatar Craig Cornish
    Date: 11/15/2012 4:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    love ya Deb but Haiku in it's most restrictive form is of no interest to me---no offense please--but one of those pursuits I chose not to chase--we all have them, "real haiku gives me a headache!!!!!!!!!!!
    Guzzi Avatar Debbie Guzzi
    Date: 11/15/2012 3:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    though my line 3 maybe too cause and affect we must stay away from that!
  1. Date: 11/12/2012 4:50:00 AM
    Congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 11/10/2012 6:17:00 PM
    Craig, :-) talk about haiku.... what a furious image you got going on here... what happened to the 5 sense destroyed them all with the imagery of this haiku... what a win... always~pd

  1. Date: 11/10/2012 11:16:00 AM
    congratulations Craig....Seren

  1. Date: 11/10/2012 8:14:00 AM
    Congratulations on your winning haiku.

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 10:41:00 AM
    Congrats Craig on your win with this very nice haiku!

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 7:59:00 AM
    Craig, congratulations on your well-deserved win! You pack so much feeling and imagery into these short lines. Very well done indeed :)

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 7:30:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in the Hurricane Haiku contest Craig. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 2:23:00 AM
    Few words......... felt all over Huge congrats coming from the Netherlands. Ellie Daphne.

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 1:38:00 AM
    Congratulations on your winning poem in Hurricanes contest, well done!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 1:19:00 AM
    Big congrats on your win Craig and your bbq, it went down a storm. Only dropped one shrimp too. xx

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 11:56:00 PM
    Congratulations, Craig. You showed exactly the picture of a hurricane.

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  1. Date: 11/8/2012 7:59:00 PM
    Thank you' San

  1. Date: 11/5/2012 3:34:00 PM
    well done, craig. I am still working on mine!

  1. Date: 11/4/2012 12:33:00 AM
    Ooooooh! Awesome piece here. So little words, but exeedingly powerful all the same. Haiku in that affect, is more than awesome. Love how you worded this. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 11:50:00 PM
    the wrath of nature..hope everything is fine..awesome haiku friend Craig. thanks for sharing. hugs. Maria

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 11:41:00 PM
    Craig, wow.... hope this is for the hurricane contest..pd

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 12:51:00 AM
    having just experienced these lines u penned craig .. very visual and real depicting 'Sandy" and her wrath .. great imagery luv .. thankxx so much for my win and place in Sleepwalk .. it is an honor to be among such premier poets on the list .. glad u enjoyed my lyrics ..