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Treat

(Misery's Ghost)

With its eyes open wide.
Ultra death is approaching!

On your knees, you are crying!
On the floor, now you are dying!
Swallowing the pain inside, asking for the reaper himself.

If you want to see dead people, 
This GHOST will bring you face to face with the light.
Then cross you over if, once you are in absolute fright.
So you better reconsider your desire to see the spirit world, 
you could become part of it.
.                      !!!                             .
Do you hear that low bubbling noise rising up from within?
Wait, wait that is he or she…. *The dead*
No...You are still gurgling of your stomach, is it?
This It is not hunger, it is not even indigestion, it is Mount Killomen about to blow.
A Ghostly effect leaving your soul blowup in tiny pieces minutes after you see its glow.

A 'Ghost so potent enough it will wipe you off the face of the earth.
Like a trace, every fragment of this Ghost is a killer and if you kindle it, 
you might not live to tell. 
You should exercise it with extreme caution.
When ‘The Ghost’ is around,
There is no going back, 
Once you had seen it!
You’ll never find a way too fight off this evil intrusion!!

After you have lived, the ghost will haunt you long after your soul is dead and gone.
First, the sensation that your buried alive, 
then the frightening phenomena of feeling like the ghoul is trapped within,
and clawing its way out. 
You will enjoy your evening with the undead until they come to claim what is left of you.
Living out loud your tortured soul.

Soon you will find out you have inherited; SATAN'S BLOOD
It is to be expected. 
This Ghost does have a forked tongue. 
Misery, made everyone think that he was just another ghost. 
Until you see, ‘The Ghost’ and what he or she has done?  
You will experience how it makes your blood boil like a thousand fiery lashes from Satan's whip, you might be able to escape his snare, hell if you can escape his stare,

Then you will wish for a Laxative.
To flush the insanity that haunted you all those years.
The End…………  

By;pd

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  1. Date: 12/19/2012 6:39:00 PM

    Jeepers! So spooky! :o0 Nice one...

  1. Date: 12/12/2012 3:00:00 AM

    Dear PD many thanks for you many inspiring congratulatory notes at my pages! love..

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 3:55:00 PM

    Yikes, you're all dressed up like Mrs Claus, but where's the "treat"? Hot and spicy cookie happening here PD. Well penned, this 'dramatic dialogue'! Hope your holidays will be happy ones.:) Love, Mikki

  1. Date: 12/6/2012 8:45:00 AM

    Gripping write! I love this kind of poetry, dark and deep. Enjoyed, and when it comes to posting my poems here, I'm afraid I can't share'em all 'cause some of my poems are just too personal and it's best if they are kept on my computer! But I'm really glad you liked everything that I've posted so far and I appreciate all your comments for sure. Have a nice day Linda. -- Sean

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 9:09:00 PM

    ah yes my sweet the words do flow, a laxative weak an maybe slow, could be the end of me, cos i dunno, if the Satans up this creek, or the ghost will take me 4 a freak, cos damnit i wont go! :)

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 8:55:00 PM

    Wow PD, this is fabulous, it makes me very afraid at what might come, strongly portrayed!

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 6:47:00 PM

    Oookkkkaaaay!! Somehow I missed this one. I love it! Did you read my dramatic verse? It's a little scarey....Thanks for the comments..Love, Holly

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 7:22:00 PM

    Well--thanks for the comment. This is not a serene subject. I am not a fan of being afraid, but sometimes can't help but feel fear. I guess you're saying that once released, there is no going back. Interesting title. If the treat is this bad, I'd hate to know what the trick is.

  1. Date: 11/17/2012 7:26:00 AM

    Can you send a laxative now? Enjoyed your scary write too much, I'm afraid I won't be able to sleep anymore! Great write, PD! Love, Hanitra

  1. Date: 11/14/2012 3:03:00 PM

    hey were you in that contest, PD? the one of Susan's? Hope to see you in more contests!!

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 3:14:00 PM

    Thanks or stopping by to say hi! Wish you the very best and have a wonderful Thanksgiving! Take care! JP

  1. Date: 11/10/2012 11:31:00 PM

    well pd my bff i have been trying for hours most of today to view your poetry list ..to no avail till now ..ron is a persistent guy and i am utterly frustrated with ps being unable to help me out and fix things for me .oh oh .. btw .. a fascinating write luv .. glad it is not the reality for u .. hope i can view another treat of yours before we call 'lights out' bff for life ..

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 2:38:00 PM

    Yup, that is what I need to get back in my head; a lax, the grisly effects of this will keep me on the move for awhile PD. So glad it's a figment of your imagination and not true! Love, Lizzie

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 5:35:00 PM

    Awww, you've been busy! I was trying to picture Misery, and the pic I've come up with, I think I'll take this ghost down...lol...just stopping by PDL!

  1. Date: 11/6/2012 5:36:00 PM

    The poem draws a real scary picture. A nice presentation -very dramatic. Thanks PD for admiring my Tanka Kiss of Death. You are always very kind. Love. -Mohammad

  1. Date: 11/4/2012 4:43:00 AM

    What a lovely belated halloween treat that was. The trick must be a laxatively haunted evening. Enjoyed. Thank you pd.

  1. Date: 11/4/2012 1:45:00 AM

    Hi, my dear sisie! Always salute and thumbs up to all your great masterpieces and work especially the dramatic monologue or dramatic verses (always a tremendous write of yours). I'm trying to identify the difference between dramatic monologue and dramatic verses so I'm spending more time on the soup now going and reading the examples of yours. You know, I'm so interested in this form 'coz I love declamations, speeches and orations when I was a child and younger years, lol. I joined many contests b4 ;))

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 11:34:00 AM

    WOW! Girl you have an awesome mind to come up with something like this. This is one great write. Thanks for sharing. Lucy

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 8:41:00 AM

    Revisiting this explosive write once again,pd, really great!! jag

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 6:25:00 AM

    Interesting write. Scary too. Well done. Tfs

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 1:30:00 AM

    Misery personified. One scary treat from you my friend!!!!

  1. Date: 11/2/2012 7:54:00 PM

    Not a very Happy Halloween in NYC. A hurricane killed people and knocked out power where I live in NYC. Scary poem! Do you remember the movie "Ghost" or "Ghostbusters"? Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 11/2/2012 7:13:00 PM

    Aha! Halloween inspires you! : ) I dont know why...but it seems as if you're talking to one person in particular. ..and regarding the laxative...it seems as if this person is full of ...halloween! LOL! See? Im commenting! Have a nice evening. Ruben.

  1. Date: 11/2/2012 2:37:00 PM

    I just sent you a soup mail about how to upload a photo from your computer, but when I hit validate, I got an error message. Please let me know if you did or did not receive the mail.

  1. Date: 11/2/2012 2:30:00 PM

    I am running as fast as I can away from this place. A vivid picture you have fashoned from your words. Another fine piece of art.

  1. Date: 11/2/2012 12:35:00 PM

    Hi PD laxatives don't need one after this read superb my friend, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 11/2/2012 11:57:00 AM

    what a raking write, PD... love the free-flowing, expressive musings of this piece!... imaginative!.. :) huggs to ya!

  1. Date: 11/1/2012 8:52:00 PM

    Ooooh creeeeepaaaaay. Loved every word. Laxatives please!! hehe Always, Laura

  1. Date: 11/1/2012 6:31:00 PM

    I know it took some time to write that, good job. It is about the eternal struggle between food and the digestive system. On a more serious note, jokes aside, I learned a little while back to live according to the spirit, not the flesh. Romans 8 is a good chapter. When we do that we free our soul, not wanting it to be tortured by any means. It is the fact we live in this flesh but if we can learn not to live by it, so it isn't bad to live in the spirit world, if you are living inthe right spirit

  1. Date: 11/1/2012 4:37:00 PM

    Dramatic monologue indeed, That's a very ghostly actionfilled story, well written I enloyed reading it,God bless you.Hugs!Erich

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