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Ocean's Chamber

My kingdom is underground,
Protected by the sea.
My castle can't be found,
But that's no guarantee.

Howls of misery and shrieks of despair,
Are carried by the deep.
A chorus of pleading prayer,
Is tricked into eternal sleep.

You fools will never learn,
My fortress is a secret,
A welcome you can't earn.
A crime you should regret.

Glancing out my window,
Your bodies often float.
You drowned in my ocean's glow,
A place that's so remote.

I keep my kingdom veiled,
Guarded from harm and anger.
In this realm, I am nailed,
Trapped in my ocean's chamber.

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  1. Date: 11/20/2012 6:06:00 PM

    You may want to consider (My castle can be found) it makes more sense. You are a very good writer, I enjoy the mood you have created.

  1. Date: 11/18/2012 9:50:00 AM

    Wow!! This is awesome!!

  1. Date: 11/1/2012 1:08:00 PM

    Beautifully written! This reminds me of Edgar Allen Poes' " Anabelle" one of my most favorite poems. You have talent. Keep writing.

  1. Date: 10/31/2012 3:36:00 PM

    We all build facades...well written, Adria! Jimbo

  1. Date: 10/31/2012 12:45:00 PM

    Excellent write..I'll be reading more of your work..please keep writing.

  1. Date: 10/31/2012 12:11:00 PM

    You have written a good poem, Adria. - Welcome to P-Soup, hope you will have a lot of fun to share your poems here with us. oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/31/2012 9:18:00 AM

    Good piece. I enjoyed reading it. xx