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Trembling

Swish Swish SwishSwish.
Tripped and almost fell in a ditch!
 HEART is P-O-U-N-D-I-N-G
dniheb kooL
STILL have time
Freezing but I can't notice
left					
		right
left
		right
run		
		run
				run

with all your might
up the driveway, 
there's the car
h
c
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o
p

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h
t

p
u

boooooooom
“eeeehh yikes”
kabooooom
kicks in the front door
Latch still works, 
now it's locked 
 r m  l  n 
t e  b  I  g

E911 on my phone worked, 
Police car is here 
Mr. Man in the big white dodge
You'll have to get my through all this fog..

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  1. Date: 10/31/2012 1:20:00 AM

    I read this forwards then backwards, worked both ways for me, nice job Sharon, Blessings, Carl

    Van Buskirk Avatar Sharon Van Buskirk Date: 10/31/2012 1:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Funny..i never intended for it to go both ways but your right.