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Sound Asleep, I leave you

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Sound Asleep, I leave you

In my veins, I feel it.
The velvet that runs deep.
My thought are often crowded,
But you open me up with ease.

The rhythmic hammering in my chest,
takes flight when you're around.
A unyielding elation showers me,
My body begins to shake.

Your head is moving closer,
And our hands are interlocked.
Your voice is simmering at the tip of your tongue,
And I breathe in something hot.

You're perfect, he whispers.
I listened with intent.
His palms were getting sweaty,
And his breathing began to even.

Sorry, I whisper to myself.
A instant flood of guilt.
Discreetly, I rise and gain composure,
As I peep at your face.

Sound asleep I leave you,
Peaceful and carefree.
I know that you are dreaming,
And I hope it's about me.

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  1. Date: 10/31/2012 12:43:00 PM
    I hope you had the opportunity to read this to that special someone of yours..A beautiful write from top to bottom! regards INK-U-SCRIPT

  1. Date: 10/31/2012 5:04:00 AM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Adria. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol