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FIRST FALL SNOW

FIRST FALL  SNOW

Frigid winds 
Indent the once silken
Radiance of a bygone,
Sun struck summer
Terrain .  It’s
Fall, and
All that 
Lingers is
Lightly coated with
Snow, a
Now troubling harbinger
Of surely approaching
Winter 

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  1. Date: 11/22/2012 4:00:00 PM

    Daver, love the acrostic,,, chilly,,, i need a blanket all of a sudden, enjoyed stopping by once again ;-)~ Hope you are having a joyous holiday. Take care ~PD

  1. Date: 11/10/2012 3:05:00 PM

    awesome write, Daver

  1. Date: 11/4/2012 2:50:00 PM

    You have presented a thoughtful and sensory rich Piece here Daver.."

  1. Date: 10/30/2012 2:03:00 PM

    Aaaahhh, and mom has hot cocoa waiting inside;) thanks for the beautiful scene and a childhood memory!

  1. Date: 10/30/2012 12:59:00 PM

    Hi Daver - Little bit of snow on a sunny day - beautiful. Lot of snow on a windy day - trouble. What a double-edged sword. I already miss summer, too. Thanks for your comment about my poem. - Gail

  1. Date: 10/30/2012 12:29:00 PM

    I love winter, when I'm all snuggled up by a beautiful open fire, so winter can be magical, depends how you look at it, love elizabeth