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Fragile Love

shimmering surface
taut beams supporting body
spanning cavity
filled with insecurity
hollow bridge in current sways

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  1. Date: 11/1/2012 10:03:00 AM

    ‡ Make Myself A Theme Song From My Childhood, 'Your Going To Make It After All.' LOL, The Mary Tyler Moore Show. Any Heart Brushed Canvas Is A Becomes A Beautiful Painting, Dear Sweet Stephen. I Love The Metaphor And Thank You For Your Very Beautiful Comment; Poetic As Lovely. Love, Rachel *

  1. Date: 10/30/2012 2:27:00 PM

    Stephen .... really lovely Tanka - - oxox always / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/30/2012 1:43:00 PM

    love this comparison of love to a fragile bridge!!