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A Vision

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A Vision

I see her pale white flowing gown,
her imagery, her frown,
her silver thinning hair,
her paper like wrinkled skin.

Feeling quite frightful,
but no overtaking fear,
of this vision floating through the air,
and not going in to despair.

Trying to awaken my consciousness,
for I must be comatosed,
surely I am not in the living world,
my head must be in the cloud's.

I wake up in a sweat,
not knowing what has just happened,
it all seems so surreal,
do I stand in judgement or appeal.

Piecing together my thought processes,
was it a dream or a reality,
wishing, thinking of my grandmother looking ocer me,
sending me a sense of peace and calm.

I will stay with that thought,
that beautiful vision,
of my grandmothers mission,
to deliver peace and harmony to a muddled head.

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  1. Date: 11/28/2012 7:56:00 AM

    love the pattern here lovely poem xx davidscott

    Sullivan Avatar Amanda Sullivan Date: 12/30/2012 4:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi David, thank you very much glad you enjoyed it xxx :)