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A Love-soaked Heart

You used to sing We'd share this 
tomb
And then dead leaves would 
bury me and You
What words could have haunted 
so
That I still long for You with 
heart and soul
You must have been worth it all

I'd do it again
For a chance to taste Your 
thoughts
I'd fall for You
And all Your heart-shaped scars
That kissed my skin with their 
claws

You used to say We'd share this 
moment
When life would flee from Our 
eyes
We'd stay still beneath the 
ocean
Barely alive by exchanging sighs

I'd do it all again
Just to stare at those eyes
To whisper Your name
And hope for reply
From a motionless corpse
With a love-soaked heart

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  1. Date: 11/11/2012 6:14:00 PM

    Jonathon, Congratulations with your awesome poem on the featured spots of the week.. Take care.. ~xox~pd

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 5:15:00 AM

    Enjoyed this piece immensely! Very original in content.

  1. Date: 11/6/2012 6:01:00 AM

    Congrats on your excellent poetry being featured this week Jonathon. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/4/2012 9:11:00 PM

    thank you for your comments, i appreciate them alot :) it's great to be in this place ^^

  1. Date: 11/4/2012 8:27:00 PM

    im just starting to come back t reading these wonderful pieces and im delighted to know that this was my first one:) very touching and heartwearming! Congratz!!

  1. Date: 11/4/2012 7:19:00 PM

    Congratulations on being featured this week!

  1. Date: 10/30/2012 3:36:00 AM

    Welcome to P-Soup Jonathon! Hope you'll have great pleasure to share your poems here with us. - You write very well - looking forward to more soon. - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)