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The Pivot

he plants his right hind
rocks back onto his haunches
front crossing over
he falls into his pivot
with practiced ease and beauty


October 29, 2012

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  1. Date: 1/27/2013 2:13:00 PM

    It's always nice to read a well expressed tanka poem, Tirzah, although one rarely sees one with a Western or Cowboy theme. Outstanding work! Carl.

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 8:58:00 PM

    Tirzah, love the tanka.. good night~ PD