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~ Lord I am calling you can you not hear my small voice the pages of my live are fluttering away empty pages and I am helpless to stop them can you not give me a sign something to grasp onto life is a stage it is said and I am on the stage alone broken and beautiful ~ October 29, 2012 Verse Submitted to the contest, Poems of Attitude (old)

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  1. Date: 6/10/2013 9:36:00 AM
    Constance, a nice little win, in the SKAT' contest... xox~ Always & Forever *LINDA

  1. Date: 6/9/2013 5:21:00 AM
    Beautiful. Emotional. Well deserved win

  1. Date: 6/7/2013 1:37:00 PM
    I have prayed a prayer like this several times Constance...'broken and beautiful'...Perfect - Tim

  1. Date: 6/7/2013 12:47:00 PM
    I sense what you brought from the heart, straight with deep and personal attitude. SKAT

  1. Date: 11/10/2012 2:50:00 PM
    enjoyed reading this awesome write again - the last lines are so powerful

  1. Date: 11/4/2012 3:02:00 PM
    so sad but so beautiful. I hope you are feeling better now, my friend

  1. Date: 10/30/2012 1:01:00 AM
    Constance this is so sad and endearing luv. Hope you are well.

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 9:07:00 PM
    The heartache I hear, the beauty I see, the poetry I feel. Constance, the last line is my favourite, as it speaks to me on too many levels to mention is this tiny space. So glad you're on Soup, Dearheart, and that perhaps ... just a tad... its providing a small comfort... hope you are doing somewhat better. Your inspiration was never forgotten. Hugs, Cyndi

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 3:55:00 PM
    A beautiful prayer for advice and help. - Very well written Constance - Hope you are doing well. - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 3:46:00 PM
    just saw this one come up. I love it, Constance. I think I am feeling this way too feeling so sad for hubbie, who has not found a new job yet. He may be forced to go back to that horrid company he was working for last month, since they said they would keep a spot for him if he wanted back. Is everything ok with you?

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 3:07:00 PM
    Talking about beautiful, this poem is certainly very beautiful my friend! I really enjoyed reading this vastly wondrous and harmonious write this afternoon! What a fabulous piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 2:58:00 PM
    Lord I am calling you can you not hear my small voice the pages of my live are fluttering away

    Lander Avatar Annie Lander
    Date: 10/29/2012 3:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    we need all the help we can get tonight.. the wrath of sandy..is upon us..