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Buried Graves

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Buried Graves

Buried Graves There was an old house that stood vacant for years alone Alone by itself on a street called dead end This couple decided to buy the place, a treasure they would own Little did they know what they were actually buy then It was soon found out that it was a funeral home years ago They closed it down because the undertaker who owned the place Was caught not burying the bodies where they were supposed to go Instead they were buried somewhere else without a trace A few weeks after moving in they started hearing heavy footsteps Moaning noises coming from between the thick walls They were times the couple started feeling regrets Perhaps they should’ve never bought this place at all Apparitions were seen walking down the hallways late at night Dark shadows were found luring as they woke them up from a sleep There were spirits there showing themselves in death’s sight Decaying white pale skin and black rotting teeth Then one day the new couple decided to dig up the ground Planning to plant seeds inside a garden they were going to make When suddenly they came across human bones that no one had found Buried so deep to hide the secret that hid in this place They didn't sleep that night because they already knew that day Their house was nothing but cemetery land filled with numerous graves So they grabbed their things and rushed towards the car to get away When suddenly they all started coming up from the ground with the moans they made Quickly he turned the key in the ignition and they sped out of there Looking back, the couple could still can see them walking up the road They were only grateful they could leave this living nightmare Until they woke up the next morning and realized they never left home…
Happy Halloween

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  1. Date: 10/30/2012 8:55:00 AM

    Excellent story Gail, it seems like a true story to me, if it isn't, what an imagination on you! Either way it is great poetry for this time of the year, I am thinking of posting one for Halloween but it might be quiet disturbing, it deals with possession, on the second thought, I will leave it be, love vie

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle Date: 10/30/2012 9:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Vie, you should write that Halloween poem. Me and Russell are going to do a Halloween Finale sometime today, posting numerous poems at a time. Hope you're well. Always Love, Gail
  1. Date: 10/30/2012 6:27:00 AM

    OH WHAT A SPOOKY STORIES GAIL LOL I FELT A BIT CREAP OUT LOL. BUT NEVER THE LESS YOU KEPT ME CAPTIVATED THE WHOLE TIME. LOL I'D WATCH A HORROR MOVIE NOW AND THEN I LIKE THAT FEELING I GET WHEN AM SO SPOOKED OUT LOL. THANX FOR SHARING THIS AWESOME HORROR STORY.

  1. Date: 10/30/2012 2:48:00 AM

    Hey Gail this is excellent, your diversity is shown to it's max here within this wonderful story....

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 11:28:00 PM

    MOST INCREDIBLE WRITE GAIL ANGEL .. MUCH HALLOWEEN FLAVOR TO ENTERTAIN LUV .. MANY THANKXX FOR MY WIN .. THE FACT THAT U ENJOY MY ENTRIES MAKES IT ALL WORTHWHILE TO CREATE NEW FROM YOUR INSPIRING THEMES .. AM BLESSED AND GIVE THANKXX TO GOD TO BE ABLE TO SHARE MY WORDS ..

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 2:59:00 PM

    YES!!! A fantastic write, I loved the way you brought suspense to the poem my friend! I really enjoyed reading this incredible and fabulous write this afternoon! What power you wield within that mighty quill of yours Gail, a delight to read this today! You have continued yet again the special Halloween atmosphere here on the Soup. I'm so glad that you have too! I'll be uploading many poems tomorrow for Halloween, there have been several today, but the bulk of them will be tomorrow Great Work!!

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle Date: 10/29/2012 3:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Russell, thanks for enjoying Buried Graves. I will be joining you in tomorrow grand finale of Halloween poems where we will be filling up the poetry boards full of Halloween scary surprises my friend. Hugs, Gail
  1. Date: 10/29/2012 2:30:00 PM

    one of the best stories I have read...and the ending is so good....great write Gail ....thanks for the treat.....love

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle Date: 10/29/2012 3:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Joseph, thank you for enjoying Buried Graves. I'm glad it gave you the Halloween scare. Booo!!! hahha Hugs and luv always, Gail
  1. Date: 10/29/2012 2:20:00 PM

    Like the ending but it leaves me wondering did they not leave the home before the funeral home and it was all a dream or did they not leave the funeral home?..Thanks for stopping by my blog..Sara

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle Date: 10/29/2012 3:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Sara, thanks for enjoying Buried Graves. The ending is them waking up to the house that they just bought (the old funeral parlor) Thanks for asking luv. Hugs, Gail
  1. Date: 10/29/2012 2:18:00 PM

    Scary house ..... with many sounds from the past ... (I think that's exciting) - Very well told Gail. - Happy Halloween ! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle Date: 10/29/2012 3:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Anne, thanks for enjoying Buried Graves today. Tomorrow me and Russell are going to doing the Halloween finale filling up the poetry boards full of treats. Have a great day, luv Gail