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Blue devils

Teardrops in my palms
Shapeless, bitter emotions

I tried relentlessly to caress
The sour taste, warm touch

Burns my flesh.

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  1. Date: 11/11/2012 6:20:00 PM

    Jhan, Congratulations with your awesome poem on the featured spots of the week.. Take care.. ~xox~pd

    Poet Avatar Johan Poet Date: 11/12/2012 4:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks ;)
  1. Date: 11/6/2012 5:59:00 AM

    Congrats on your excellent poetry being featured this week Johan. Love, Carol

    Poet Avatar Johan Poet Date: 11/7/2012 12:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Carol ;)
  1. Date: 10/29/2012 4:56:00 AM

    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Johan. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol

    Poet Avatar Johan Poet Date: 10/30/2012 11:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you
  1. Date: 10/28/2012 8:36:00 PM

    short but sweet check out mine an let me hear ur feed back thank you

    Poet Avatar Johan Poet Date: 10/29/2012 6:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks, best wishes