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The Way I Feel

The Way I Feel

 The way I feel,
 when I'm with you,
 I forget my troubles,
 like there's just us two.

 You make my heart,
 beat fast and strong,
 and you make me feel,
 that I truly belong.

 You fill the gaps,
 inside my heart,
 like I've finally found,
 my missing part.

 I sink in your eyes,
 I'm warmed by your smile,
 and the world is perfect,
 just for a while.

 You make life better,
 than it used to be.
 You are the sugar,
 in my cup of tea.

 Whenever you need me,
 I'll always be there.
 I'll be there to talk to,
 I'll be there to care.

 Because for you,
 I would do anything

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  1. Date: 10/30/2012 4:33:00 PM

    Good job, enjoyed your poem. She sounds lovely.

    Keith Avatar Roy Keith Date: 10/30/2012 7:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you my good man
  1. Date: 10/30/2012 11:46:00 AM

    Very sweet poem! My favourite line: "You are the sugar in my cup of tea." Love it!

    Keith Avatar Roy Keith Date: 10/30/2012 7:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you
  1. Date: 10/29/2012 9:04:00 PM

    Hi Roy, your poem is amazing, you have the feelings of all feelings...love the love you expose...always~ pd

    Keith Avatar Roy Keith Date: 10/30/2012 7:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you
  1. Date: 10/29/2012 9:28:00 AM

    This is way good man, keep it up, your good at putting your emotion in your words!

    Keith Avatar Roy Keith Date: 10/29/2012 7:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you
  1. Date: 10/29/2012 3:27:00 AM

    Lovely poem.

    Keith Avatar Roy Keith Date: 10/29/2012 7:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you
  1. Date: 10/29/2012 2:20:00 AM

    You write beautifully about a person who means a lot to you. - A very nice poem Roy, well done!! Have a pleasant new week! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Keith Avatar Roy Keith Date: 10/29/2012 7:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you