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Feelings

The ultimate sensation and so pure, 
Skips a beat, uncontrollable, yet feels amazing,
Beating simultaneously - an intense magnetism

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  1. Date: 11/22/2012 4:20:00 PM

    This is an interesting form meant to be sung..I wonder what this sweet write would sound like to music? Light & Love

    khemlani Avatar Bhavna khemlani Date: 11/25/2012 1:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Aww. Thank you Debbie. I wonder too, how this would sound like to music.
  1. Date: 11/4/2012 4:20:00 PM

    very nice words you got here ;}

    khemlani Avatar Bhavna khemlani Date: 11/25/2012 1:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you :)
  1. Date: 10/29/2012 11:16:00 AM

    awesome poem Bhavna..thanks for sharing. have a nice day :)

    khemlani Avatar Bhavna khemlani Date: 11/25/2012 1:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you :)
  1. Date: 10/28/2012 6:30:00 AM

    Beautiful piece. Touching and warm. Hugs michael

    khemlani Avatar Bhavna khemlani Date: 11/25/2012 1:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you!
  1. Date: 10/28/2012 12:49:00 AM

    Good one.But why the form is Than-Bauk?

    khemlani Avatar Bhavna khemlani Date: 10/28/2012 1:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you. Inspired by the Than-Bauk style of poetry. Added four lines :) but have made back to three lines.
  1. Date: 10/27/2012 9:24:00 PM

    A close personal touch to feelings, well expressed Bhavna, enjoyed reading your poetry hugs vie

    khemlani Avatar Bhavna khemlani Date: 10/28/2012 1:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Vienna.