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In Your Eyes

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In Your Eyes

In Your Eyes In your eyes is a broken window Of painful memories which transformed an old soul Though the sparkle that I can faintly see Will someday ignite your fire to a flame that will burn so freely In your eyes are shattered tears Coming down like rain that drowned the tender years Though your tear drops still relentlessly show A glisten into the sunshine allowing hope to grow In your eyes holds the key To a locked door which pain created eventually Though I see that I also hold the key To open the portal and set you free In your eyes I see that flame You thought had drowned in the endless rain Though if you take a look you will see the rain has stopped Raindrops had transformed into burning embers deep within your heart

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  1. Date: 10/30/2012 11:16:00 AM

    wow!! another great poem from a great poet :) I like it...its my favorite...thanks for sharing friend Gail. Love. Maria

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle Date: 10/30/2012 12:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Maria, thank you for enjoying my poem In Your Eyes. Luv, Gail
  1. Date: 10/27/2012 6:00:00 PM

    Beautiful poetry Gail. Absolutely smooth and flowing. Hugs Michael

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle Date: 10/27/2012 6:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Michael for enjoying my poem In Your Eyes. Hugs, Gail
  1. Date: 10/27/2012 4:59:00 PM

    Gail,The first three stanzas are so complete that the last stanza is not even necessary, but is the icing on the cake of a delicious treat! Your mastery of insight is astounding! Mahalo for your comments.

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle Date: 10/27/2012 5:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Connie for enjoying my poem In Your Eyes. Your comments are always appreciated. Hugs Gail
  1. Date: 10/27/2012 4:56:00 PM

    * Makes Myself Think Of An Old Verse I Once Was Told, Sweet Beautiful Gail. Place Not Your Confidence Nor Your Trust In Man, Etc. ˜ Yet Where There Is Pure True Love, Should It Not Be Seen Held Or Lifted ? Beautiful Poem. Love Always, Rachel *

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 4:25:00 PM

    A truly lovely poem Gail. Thank you for visiting my weekend blog, glad you think it was funny. Have a nice weekend. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle Date: 10/27/2012 4:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Anne, thanks for stopping by to comment on my poem In Your Eyes. Your blog was hilarious. You have to keep on doing it, it would brighten up people's days. Have a beautiful weekend as well. Luv, Gail
  1. Date: 10/27/2012 4:12:00 PM

    An amazingly beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing. Jod!e Q