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Rays of Hope

Sun brightens with full blaze and smile,
darkness covers the sun like a blanket-total eclipse,
Moon rays spread out their hands from this shield.



CONTEST:"Trinity" sponsored by Debbie Guzzi.

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  1. Date: 11/10/2012 6:05:00 PM

    Olusegun... love the win...pd

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 11:43:00 PM

    Nicely done, and won!!! Good to see you again on another winners list!

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 10:20:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win in Deborah's Contest, Olusegun!! Ruben.

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 3:41:00 PM

    Just loved your use of personification! Congrad's on Your Win! Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 3:12:00 PM

    Congratulations on your winning poems in the "Trinity" contest - well done - Huggs / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 11:40:00 AM

    congrats on your win and the lovely " moon rays". BG

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 8:48:00 AM

    Congratulations on your fine win xx

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 8:32:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win Olusegun. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 9:20:00 PM

    O.A., nice image.. enjoyed your poem* Goodnight! Always~ PD

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 3:43:00 PM

    Love this, great job Olusequn. Best wishes for Debbie's contest. Hugs, Gail

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 12:36:00 PM

    Loved it! Good luck with the contest :), Omneya