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  1. Date: 10/29/2012 4:00:00 PM
    Like it ..... very well done Clay. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/28/2012 11:08:00 AM
    Hi Clay, your poem is very deep and profound, needs to read again and again, I particularily liked the line, "the sun goes down and you cannot hold it" somehow to me that is so meaningful, it is like trying to hold onto happiness but you cannot. Thanks so much for your comment on my poem. Love Constance

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 9:04:00 PM
    Clay, deep..... enjoyed your poem* Goodnight! Always~ PD

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 9:14:00 AM
    wow, very very good my friend... Michael