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Girl Of My Dreams

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Girl Of My Dreams

Been searching high, been searching low For a gal I could spend my life with Found one but she's got a pimply bum And real bad breath, take a whiff! She's no dreamboat, sunken ship perhaps She walks with a limp and she stutters I've just got no luck, in a quandary I'm stuck Soon be old and decrepit, and I mutter Maybe it's me that might be the problem No Adonis though at one time I thought so Just coz I dribble and spit in the street Down inside I'm really quite sweet though! Surely there's a chance that I'll find her soon They say there's a mate for all lovers I'm sure she's out there, a gal I'd be proud of Not one that has wings and can hover! © Jack Ellison 2012

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  1. Date: 11/7/2012 11:02:00 AM
    She doesn't sound too appealing for a poet like yourself, but I was always told there is someone out there for everyone, so do keep looking!

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison
    Date: 11/7/2012 1:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Not too appealing at all! LOL Have a great day! Hugs, Jack
  1. Date: 10/28/2012 9:30:00 PM
    Oh No! Never give up hope... Maybe you'll be as lucky as my hubby... Tho they do say I have a face made for radio... And a voice that should be used under water! LOL... Hi I'm back! I'm with my Dad in Arizona while he finishes 2 more months of chemotherapy... The last one put him in the hospital... But I got him out for the moment, I can borrow his computer occasionally... your friend Carol

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison
    Date: 10/29/2012 5:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Always look forward to your witty comments, my dear Carol! "A face made for radio!" LOL My very best wishes for your dad, sweet friend! Love, Jack
  1. Date: 10/28/2012 9:14:00 AM
    When you find her, see if she has a sister...

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison
    Date: 10/28/2012 9:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Will do my friend! I guess we're both not as selective as we once were! LOL Cheers
  1. Date: 10/27/2012 2:34:00 PM
    You bring much smiles here.. love it... Michael

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison
    Date: 10/28/2012 4:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you my friend! Happy to put a smile on your face... cheers and happy thoughts!
  1. Date: 10/27/2012 4:35:00 AM
    I'm here ........................xx

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison
    Date: 10/27/2012 4:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ROTFLMAO!!! Checking the airlines for the next flight! Love ya! Big hugs, Jack xxx
  1. Date: 10/27/2012 4:25:00 AM
    Very funny! Love it!

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison
    Date: 10/27/2012 4:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Sharon! Glad you got a kick out of my silliness this morning... love and big hugs, Jack