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  1. Date: 11/4/2012 4:25:00 PM

    " WOW" awesome write on a truth!

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 10:35:00 AM

    intense.....nice

  1. Date: 10/28/2012 9:56:00 AM

    Nette.. Susan..is going to enjoy your poem. A sad story. Good luck...always pd

  1. Date: 10/28/2012 12:40:00 AM

    Sad write from you.It's unfortunate that this happens to that fellow..another wonderful poem!

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 9:58:00 AM

    This is a truly sad piece my friend! I feel the pain within your write as if I was there experiencing it firsthand! I too love the word combination, sty-eye, very effective in what you where trying to portray and very poetically inclined as well! Too bad about your neighbor, but there is always hope of the future, a hope to believe in, that's all we have sometimes, this hope! This is a perfect Lyrical poem Nette, I really enjoyed reading it this morning! Awesome piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 7:18:00 AM

    Very heartfelt and serious. I really liked the raw emotions you portray so well. Well done hun.

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 6:32:00 AM

    Very powerful stuff. I see you have had an early start, much to the benefit of us who get to enjoy your writing.

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 2:38:00 AM

    Too many great lines in this awesome poem, Nette! Best of luck in the contest...it's a winner. Ruben.

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 2:22:00 AM

    Lost is lost can't be regained and there's no way except living with expectation ahead. In the timepiece of innocence many nonsense things happen to many without any reason, called bad luck. Very sad, I feel being a human being. So, I pray God keeping thought in my mind to make the world better place for us. Enough is happened. Thanks for sharing. God always bless you. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 2:13:00 AM

    Setting the mood and touching on feelings are perfect ways to enhance this gripping work. I love the poem especially the final stanza with such a message of hope and faith.Outstanding talent

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 12:44:00 AM

    STANDING OVATION!! Every line was convicting from the start...justices "Sty-Eye", that image is a statue in my mind! Then to regain his freedom, after losing what Negri be regained....GOOSEBUMPS! Whatever zone you were in, don't leave!

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