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Puddles in the mist

 A gentle rain falls
as puddles reflect gray skies
 A love that once was
 now disappears in the mist
and  the  tears reflect the pain

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  1. Date: 10/28/2012 1:43:00 AM

    I enjoyed reading your poem.

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 5:48:00 PM

    wow, I am seeing some awesome reflecting poems!! this is a winner.

  1. Date: 10/26/2012 8:14:00 PM

    HI Joseph, rain and tears fall but they disappear like the mist. Enjoyed. Sherese

  1. Date: 10/26/2012 7:46:00 PM

    A very touching Tanka here Joseph.Lovely read.

  1. Date: 10/26/2012 7:30:00 PM

    Hello, Joseph :-) deep image,,,thanks for sharing* always~ PD

  1. Date: 10/26/2012 6:30:00 PM

    Loves perfect storm! Take the biter with the sweet. Nice work Joseph!

  1. Date: 10/26/2012 6:26:00 PM

    I love this Tanka! so touching I pictured the words and felt them...good job!

    May Avatar Joseph May Date: 10/27/2012 5:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Omneya